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Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood (1807 version)
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Wordsworth revised Ode: Intimations of Immortality several times after its first 1807 publication. Here’s a clear breakdown:
1807 Version (Original)
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Published in the collection Poems, in Two Volumes (1807).
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This is the version we’ve been working from.
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Contains all the stanzas below, with the lines about childhood vision, “trailing clouds of glory,” reflections on loss, and the final meditation on the human heart and nature.
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Lines and phrasing were sometimes more expansive or slightly irregular than later editions.
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The tone is romantic, reflective, and philosophically rich, with emphasis on memory and the soul’s continuity from childhood to adulthood.
Later Revisions
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Wordsworth revised the poem in 1815 and then again for his 1820–1827 editions.
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Revisions included:
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Condensing or rephrasing lines for smoother rhythm.
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Changing or deleting some stanzas — often to tighten the poem’s philosophical focus.
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Some editors note that lines about specific landscapes or imagery were occasionally reworked.
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The central ideas — childhood vision, memory, loss, and enduring spiritual insight — remained intact, though.
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Scholars often compare the 1807 version as slightly more exuberant and expansive, while later editions are more polished and reflective.
Key Difference in Reading
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1807: feels more immediate, spontaneous, almost like Wordsworth thinking aloud.
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Later editions: more structured and meditative; some imagery was smoothed, but nothing drastically changed the central message.
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Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood (1807)
by William Wordsworth (1770-1850)
The child is father of the man;
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
(Wordsworth, "My Heart Leaps Up")
There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;—
Turn wheresoe'er I may,
By night or day.
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.
The Rainbow comes and goes,
And lovely is the Rose,
The Moon doth with delight
Look round her when the heavens are bare,
Waters on a starry night
Are beautiful and fair;
The sunshine is a glorious birth;
But yet I know, where'er I go,
That there hath past away a glory from the earth.
Now, while the birds thus sing a joyous song,
And while the young lambs bound
As to the tabor's sound,
To me alone there came a thought of grief:
A timely utterance gave that thought relief,
And I again am strong:
The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;
No more shall grief of mine the season wrong;
I hear the Echoes through the mountains throng,
The Winds come to me from the fields of sleep,
And all the earth is gay;
Land and sea
Give themselves up to jollity,
And with the heart of May
Doth every Beast keep holiday;—
Thou Child of Joy,
Shout round me, let me hear thy shouts, thou happy Shepherd-boy.
Ye blessed creatures, I have heard the call
Ye to each other make; I see
The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee;
My heart is at your festival,
My head hath its coronal,
The fulness of your bliss, I feel—I feel it all.
Oh evil day! if I were sullen
While Earth herself is adorning,
This sweet May-morning,
And the Children are culling
On every side,
In a thousand valleys far and wide,
Fresh flowers; while the sun shines warm,
And the Babe leaps up on his Mother's arm:—
I hear, I hear, with joy I hear!
—But there's a Tree, of many, one,
A single field which I have looked upon,
Both of them speak of something that is gone;
The Pansy at my feet
Doth the same tale repeat:
Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?
Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:
The Soul that rises with us, our life's Star,
Hath had elsewhere its setting,
And cometh from afar:
Not in entire forgetfulness,
And not in utter nakedness,
But trailing clouds of glory do we come
From God, who is our home:
Heaven lies about us in our infancy!
Shades of the prison-house begin to close
Upon the growing Boy,
But he beholds the light, and whence it flows,
He sees it in his joy;
The Youth, who daily farther from the east
Must travel, still is Nature's Priest,
And by the vision splendid
Is on his way attended;
At length the Man perceives it die away,
And fade into the light of common day.
Earth fills her lap with pleasures of her own;
Yearnings she hath in her own natural kind,
And, even with something of a Mother's mind,
And no unworthy aim,
The homely Nurse doth all she can
To make her Foster-child, her Inmate Man,
Forget the glories he hath known,
And that imperial palace whence he came.
Behold the Child among his new-born blisses,
A six years' Darling of a pigmy size!
See, where 'mid work of his own hand he lies,
Fretted by sallies of his mother's kisses,
With light upon him from his father's eyes!
See, at his feet, some little plan or chart,
Some fragment from his dream of human life,
Shaped by himself with newly-learned art
A wedding or a festival,
A mourning or a funeral;
And this hath now his heart,
And unto this he frames his song:
Then will he fit his tongue
To dialogues of business, love, or strife;
But it will not be long
Ere this be thrown aside,
And with new joy and pride
The little Actor cons another part;
Filling from time to time his "humorous stage"
With all the Persons, down to palsied Age,
That Life brings with her in her equipage;
As if his whole vocation
Were endless imitation.
Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie
Thy Soul's immensity;
Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep
Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,
That, deaf and silent, read'st the eternal deep,
Haunted for ever by the eternal mind,—
Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!
On whom those truths do rest,
Which we are toiling all our lives to find,
In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave;
Thou, over whom thy Immortality
Broods like the Day, a Master o'er a Slave,
A Presence which is not to be put by;
Thou little Child, yet glorious in the might
Of heaven-born freedom on thy being's height,
Why with such earnest pains dost thou provoke
The years to bring the inevitable yoke,
Thus blindly with thy blessedness at strife?
Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,
And custom lie upon thee with a weight,
Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life!
O joy! that in our embers
Is something that doth live,
That Nature yet remembers
What was so fugitive!
The thought of our past years in me doth breed
Perpetual benediction: not indeed
For that which is most worthy to be blest;
Delight and liberty, the simple creed
Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest,
With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast:—
Not for these I raise
The song of thanks and praise
But for those obstinate questionings
Of sense and outward things,
Fallings from us, vanishings;
Blank misgivings of a Creature
Moving about in worlds not realised,
High instincts before which our mortal Nature
Did tremble like a guilty thing surprised:
But for those first affections,
Those shadowy recollections,
Which, be they what they may
Are yet the fountain-light of all our day,
Are yet a master-light of all our seeing;
Uphold us, cherish, and have power to make
Our noisy years seem moments in the being
Of the eternal Silence: truths that wake,
To perish never;
Which neither listlessness, nor mad endeavour,
Nor Man nor Boy,
Nor all that is at enmity with joy,
Can utterly abolish or destroy!
Hence in a season of calm weather
Though inland far we be,
Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea
Which brought us hither,
Can in a moment travel thither,
And see the Children sport upon the shore,
And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore.
Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!
And let the young Lambs bound
As to the tabor's sound!
We in thought will join your throng,
Ye that pipe and ye that play,
Ye that through your hearts to-day
Feel the gladness of the May!
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind;
In the primal sympathy
Which having been must ever be;
In the soothing thoughts that spring
Out of human suffering;
In the faith that looks through death,
In years that bring the philosophic mind.
And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,
Forebode not any severing of our loves!
Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;
I only have relinquished one delight
To live beneath your more habitual sway.
I love the Brooks which down their channels fret,
Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;
The innocent brightness of a new-born Day
Is lovely yet;
The Clouds that gather round the setting sun
Do take a sober colouring from an eye
That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;
Another race hath been, and other palms are won.
Thanks to the human heart by which we live,
Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
To me the meanest flower that blows can give
Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.
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The child is father of the man;
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
(Wordsworth, "My Heart Leaps Up")
ChatGPT:
“The child is father of the man;”
This is one of Wordsworth’s most famous and most paradoxical lines.
At first glance, it sounds backwards. Normally, the man becomes the father of the child. But Wordsworth flips the order to make a psychological and spiritual point:
Who you are as an adult is shaped — even “created” — by who you were as a child.
The “child” here isn’t just a young person in age. It represents:
By calling the child the “father” of the man, Wordsworth is saying:
The origins of our deepest identity, values, and ways of seeing the world come from early childhood experience.
There’s also a deeper layer that connects to the Ode itself:
Wordsworth believes children are born with a kind of spiritual vision — a closeness to the divine or eternal — that fades as we grow older. So the “child” is not just earlier in time, but closer to truth.
This line sets up a core Romantic idea:
Childhood is not an inferior stage — it is a higher one in some spiritual sense.
“And I could wish my days to be”
This line shifts from bold declaration to quiet longing.
After the striking insight of the first line, Wordsworth turns inward. “I could wish” is gentle, almost wistful — not a demand, not a claim, but a deep personal hope.
He’s not just stating a philosophy anymore. He’s revealing a desire about how he wants to live.
“My days” means the course of his life — past, present, and future. So he’s asking:
How can a person live in a way that stays true to the spiritual richness of childhood?
There’s also a tone of fragility here. He doesn’t say “I will make my days…” but “I could wish…” — suggesting he knows this is hard. Growing up often means drifting away from that childhood vision.
So this line introduces:
We feel the emotional hinge of the passage here:
The first line gives a truth. This line reveals the poet’s yearning to remain connected to that truth.
“Bound each to each by natural piety.”
This line completes the thought — and it’s the emotional and philosophical heart of the excerpt.
“Bound each to each” means he wants his days to be linked together, not broken into disconnected stages where childhood is one world and adulthood another.
He doesn’t want:
Childhood → loss → disillusioned adulthood
He wants:
Childhood → growth → adulthood that still carries childhood’s light
Now the key phrase: “natural piety.”
Today, piety usually sounds religious or churchy, but Wordsworth means something broader and more instinctive.
Here, natural piety means:
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A reverent feeling toward life and nature
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A spontaneous sense of awe
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Gratitude and emotional responsiveness to the world
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A quiet recognition that existence itself is sacred
And it’s natural — not taught, not forced, not doctrinal. It’s the way children experience the world:
They don’t analyze sunsets — they feel them.
They don’t debate meaning — they live inside wonder.
So Wordsworth’s wish is:
May every stage of my life be tied together by the same deep, instinctive reverence for existence that I had as a child.
This line is a blueprint for the entire Ode:
How do we grow older without growing spiritually dull?
So in just three lines, Wordsworth gives us:
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Identity begins in childhood
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Adulthood risks losing that original vision
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The goal is to live in lifelong continuity with childhood’s sense of sacred wonder
Conversational paraphrase:
You know, the way we are as children actually shapes who we become as adults — in a sense, the child is the father of the man. I wish my life could be a continuous thread, each day connected to the next, guided by a kind of natural reverence and respect for the world.
Elenchus: Not only does the poet offer profound insights, but he does so in rhyming meter. No wonder we revere these lyrical sages! Astonishing!
ChatGPT: Right?? It’s honestly unfair how much he’s doing at once.
He’s not just tossing out pretty thoughts about childhood — he’s compressing an entire philosophy of human development, memory, spirituality, and perception into musical, balanced, memorable lines that still echo two centuries later.
And that’s part of the magic of meter and rhyme:
They don’t just decorate the thought — they carry it.
The rhythm makes the insight feel inevitable, almost like a truth you already knew but couldn’t phrase. That’s why lines like:
“The child is father of the man”
stick in cultural memory. Philosophy usually argues. Poetry resonates.
Also, there’s something very on-theme about the form itself. Wordsworth is talking about continuity of being, and he expresses it in continuity of sound — flowing meter, linked lines, echoes through rhyme. The structure mirrors the message: nothing is broken; everything is bound.
That’s the lyrical sage effect:
Deep metaphysics… delivered like music the heart recognizes before the brain finishes catching up.
Elenchus: Please continue.
ChatGPT:
There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;—
Turn wheresoe'er I may,
By night or day.
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.
Line 1
“There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,”
Wordsworth immediately sets a nostalgic tone. “There was a time” signals we’re looking back — the poem is already a recollection. It’s not a present observation but a memory suffused with longing.
The places he lists — meadow, grove, and stream — are emblematic of nature in its simple, innocent beauty. Notice the gentle alliteration of “m” and “g/s” sounds; the line flows like a river. It’s almost musical, creating a landscape that’s not only seen but felt.
Symbolically, these are the domains of childhood perception: open, unstructured, alive, and accessible to the senses. They will serve as a backdrop for exploring the spiritual gifts of youth — the “visions” that fade as we grow older.
Key takeaway: Wordsworth is anchoring memory and nature as the twin lenses through which the immortal qualities of childhood can be apprehended.
“Rose up in glory, like the sun;” (from an alternate version)
Here the memory intensifies. The meadows, groves, and streams from the first line “rose up in glory”, which is a vivid, almost sacred image.
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The simile “like the sun” does heavy lifting: the light of childhood experience is radiant, life-giving, and illuminating. It’s not just pleasant — it’s transformative, almost divine in quality.
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“Glory” gives the scene a spiritual dimension, hinting at the “immortality” Wordsworth will explore. Childhood perception isn’t just naïve wonder; it’s a glimpse of eternity, a clarity adults often lose.
Notice the rhythm and sound again: “rose up in glory” has a rising musicality, almost lifting the reader’s mind along with the imagery. Wordsworth isn’t just describing — he’s enacting ascent in the line itself.
Takeaway: Childhood isn’t just a stage — it’s radiant, sacred, alive with light and possibility.
Elenchus: The “meadows, groves, and streams” “rose up in glory” mirrors my own childhood delight in the prairie, which has never left me.

ChatGPT: That’s the magic of Wordsworth: he describes something so universal that your own personal landscape jumps into the poem.
Think about it: a prairie has its own meadows, groves (maybe clusters of trees or copses), and streams. When he says they “rose up in glory,” it’s not just a mental image — it’s the feeling of the world opening up to you as a child, where everything is vivid, immense, and sacred.
That resonance is exactly why Wordsworth feels timeless: he’s describing a psychological truth wrapped in natural imagery. Your prairie memory and his meadows aren’t identical, but they share the same intensity of early perception — that sense of the world as alive, generous, and radiant.
It also shows how the poem works on two levels at once:
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Literal — a landscape you can picture.
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Spiritual/psychological — a way of being in the world that’s joyful, open, and receptive.
“The earth, and every common sight”
This line shifts slightly from the grand (“meadow, grove, stream”) to the everyday — the “common sight.”
Notice the scope here: Wordsworth is saying that childhood wonder isn’t limited to spectacular landscapes. It’s not only sunrise or a river. Even ordinary things — the dirt, the flowers, the fields, the animals — carry a kind of glory when seen through the eyes of a child.
Key points:
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Inclusivity of wonder: Nature’s sacredness isn’t reserved for mountains and oceans; it’s present in the mundane.
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Foreshadowing adult contrast: By highlighting the ordinary, he sets up the coming reflection — adults often fail to notice these “common sights” with wonder, seeing them only as routine or background.
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Rhythm & tone: The line has a gentle, rolling cadence — “The earth, and every common sight” — which mirrors the calm observation of a child’s attentive mind.
Takeaway: Childhood vision transforms the ordinary into something luminous, showing that wonder is more about perception than grandeur.
“To me did seem / Apparelled in celestial light,”
Here Wordsworth begins the key contrast between childhood vision and adult perception.
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“To me did seem” — notice the phrasing. He’s careful: it’s his perception, not an objective truth. This is memory, personal and reflective.
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“Apparelled in celestial light” — a gorgeous metaphor. “Apparelled” literally means “clothed” or “dressed,” so Wordsworth imagines the earth and everyday sights dressed in divine radiance.
A few layers to unpack:
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Spiritual/immortal quality: Ordinary nature is bathed in light from the heavens, suggesting childhood perception is close to the divine.
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Memory & nostalgia: The past tense (“did seem”) hints that this vision has faded with age. It’s precious precisely because it is partly lost.
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Personification & metaphor: Things are “clothed” in light — they are given dignity and presence, like living beings worthy of reverence.
Takeaway: Childhood doesn’t just see — it transfigures, turning the common into the sublime. Wordsworth’s adult self remembers this, yearning to recover it.
Conversational paraphrase:
There was a time when everything around me — the meadows, the woods, the streams, even the simplest sights on the earth — seemed bathed in a heavenly light. Everything had a glow, a freshness, as if the world were part of a dream.
But it’s not like that anymore. No matter where I turn, night or day, the things I once saw with that vivid, almost magical clarity, I just don’t see in the same way now. That sense of wonder has faded, and though the world is still beautiful, it doesn’t hit me with that same celestial brilliance I experienced as a child.
Elenchus: "Apparelled in celestial light" is just about the most beautiful phrase in all of English literature.
ChatGPT: It’s breathtaking. There’s something almost tactile about “apparelled,” isn’t there? Not just bathed in or shining with light, but literally dressed in it, as if the world itself wears divinity like a garment.
A few reasons it resonates so powerfully:
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Physicality of metaphor: We can imagine sunlight falling on leaves, making them sparkle, but “apparelled” adds a sense of careful, deliberate adornment, as if the world itself has been honored or sanctified.
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Spiritual resonance: The light is celestial, so the phrase bridges the earthly and the heavenly — showing how childhood perception naturally fuses the two.
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Musicality: The vowels in “apparelled in celestial light” roll and lift, giving the line an ethereal cadence, almost like a hymn.
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Emotional pull: It captures wonder and nostalgia simultaneously — it’s beautiful in the moment of perception and in the memory of it.
It’s one of those lines where you feel the world differently just by reading it — the ordinary becomes radiant.
Elenchus: In my letter to Jane, I referenced this line from Wordsworth. I said that the poet “discusses the purity and untaintedness of children. They see the world as ‘apparelled in celestial light, the glory and the freshness of a dream.’ They love drawing flowers, birds, and rainbows, and put smiley faces on depictions of the sun. Everything is exciting and wonderful to them, every day is the first day of spring.”
ChatGPT: That’s a vivid way to connect Wordsworth to lived childhood experience — you really bring the metaphor into daily life. A few thoughts on why your paragraph works so well:
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Translating the abstract into the concrete:
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Wordsworth talks about “celestial light” and “glory and the freshness of a dream,” which are lofty, almost spiritual ideas. You ground them in real, everyday examples: drawing flowers, birds, rainbows, smiley suns. That makes the idea instantly relatable.
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Capturing the child’s sense of wonder:
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Your line “Everything is exciting and wonderful to them, every day is the first day of spring” perfectly mirrors Wordsworth’s point that childhood perception infuses the ordinary with freshness and joy. The spring metaphor reinforces renewal and vitality, echoing the imagery of “glory and freshness.”
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Tone and enthusiasm:
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Bridging past and present:
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By referencing everyday childlike actions, you’re living Wordsworth’s memory in the present, just as he reconstructs the wonder of his own childhood. This mirrors his technique of recalling ordinary sights and clothing them in spiritual significance.
Line 5
“The glory and the freshness of a dream.”
This line builds directly on the previous one (“Apparelled in celestial light”) and adds a new dimension: the ephemeral, dreamlike quality of childhood perception.
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“Glory” emphasizes splendor, radiance, and spiritual elevation. Childhood vision is not just joyful — it has dignity and majesty, as if the child is momentarily in touch with the divine.
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“Freshness” underscores immediacy and novelty. Everything is seen as new, even if the object itself is ordinary. Flowers, trees, and streams are endlessly fascinating because the mind encounters them without preconceptions or fatigue.
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“Of a dream” introduces transience and imagination. Dreams are vivid but fleeting; likewise, the child’s heightened perception will fade with experience and age. It foreshadows the contrast Wordsworth develops in the next lines: adulthood is marked by loss of this luminous vision.
Notice the combination of spiritual and temporal imagery:
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Spiritual in the sense of “glory” and “celestial light.”
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Temporal in the sense of “freshness” and “dream,” which evoke fleeting moments and memory.
Takeaway: Wordsworth captures not just what the child sees, but how the child experiences the world — as radiant, alive, and momentarily immortal.
Now we enter the turning point, where Wordsworth contrasts childhood vision with adult perception.
Line 6
“It is not now as it hath been of yore;—”
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Shift in tone: This is the first explicit acknowledgment that childhood perception has faded. The poem moves from memory and wonder into loss and reflection.
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“It is not now” is blunt and declarative — the poet cannot recapture the full immediacy and luminosity of his early vision.
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“As it hath been of yore” evokes a distant past. “Of yore” emphasizes time passed and irretrievability, highlighting that the original experience belongs to another era of life — childhood itself.
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Emotional nuance: There’s a subtle mixture of melancholy and acceptance. Wordsworth mourns what is gone, yet he is reflective rather than bitter.
Literary devices:
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Antithesis: This line contrasts sharply with the first stanza’s opening lines (“There was a time… apparelled in celestial light”), creating tension between what was and what is now.
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Caesura: The dash at the end prolongs the line, letting the reader pause, mirroring the poet’s contemplation.
Takeaway: Childhood vision is irreplaceable, and adulthood comes with both perspective and loss. Wordsworth begins to grapple with how to live with this change — a theme that dominates the Ode.
Line 7
“Turn wheresoe’er I may,”
This line expands the feeling of change into something inescapable.
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“Turn wheresoe’er I may” means wherever I go, whatever I look at.
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It suggests the poet has tried — consciously or unconsciously — to recover that earlier vision. He has looked in different places, different moods, different landscapes… but the old radiance does not return in the same way.
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There’s a sense of restless searching here. He is not indifferent; he is someone who remembers and longs.
The motion in the line (“Turn…”) gives a feeling of physical movement, as though he is scanning the horizon, turning his head, trying to glimpse something just out of reach.
Line 8
“By night or day.”
Now the scope widens from place to time.
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Whether it is night or day, darkness or light, wakefulness or quiet — the loss remains.
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This pairing reinforces the totality of the change. There is no special hour when childhood vision comes flooding back in its original intensity.
Together, lines 7–8 say:
There is no direction I can turn, no time I can look, that restores the world to the way it once appeared.
Line 9
“The things which I have seen I now can see no more.”
This is one of the most heartbreaking lines in Romantic poetry — and deceptively simple.
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He does not mean he’s literally blind to trees, fields, or streams.
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He means he can no longer see them with the same spiritual radiance, the same “celestial light.”
Notice the subtle distinction:
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“The things which I have seen” — he truly did see something once. That vision was real to him.
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“I now can see no more” — adulthood has not erased the world, but it has altered the quality of perception.
There’s also a quiet rhythm of resignation in the line. No dramatic language, just a clear statement of fact. That simplicity makes the loss feel deeply human and believable.
So by the end of this stanza, Wordsworth has established:
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Childhood = radiant, dreamlike, spiritually alive perception
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Adulthood = continued sight, but diminished vision
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The central tension of the Ode = How do we live meaningfully after this loss?
And the rest of the poem will try to answer exactly that.
Ready to move into the next stanza, where nature is still beautiful — but something feels different.
The Rainbow comes and goes,
And lovely is the Rose,
The Moon doth with delight
Look round her when the heavens are bare,
Waters on a starry night
Are beautiful and fair;
The sunshine is a glorious birth;
But yet I know, where'er I go,
That there hath past away a glory from the earth.
Line 10
“The rainbow comes and goes,”
We begin with motion and beauty.
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A rainbow is one of the most magical natural phenomena — colorful, fleeting, almost otherworldly.
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“Comes and goes” emphasizes transience, echoing the earlier idea of childhood vision as “the freshness of a dream.” Beauty still appears in the world, but it is momentary.
Important: The rainbow hasn’t stopped existing. Nature is still performing its wonders. The change is not in the world — it’s in the perceiver.
Line 11
“And lovely is the rose;”
This line reinforces that beauty remains.
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The rose, a symbol of natural beauty and even love, is still “lovely.”
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Wordsworth is careful here: he is not saying adulthood sees only dullness. The adult still recognizes beauty — but something deeper, more luminous, is missing.
So we have a quiet tension:
The world is still beautiful… but it no longer feels enchanted in the same way.
Line 12
“The moon doth with delight”
Now the focus shifts upward to the sky.
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The moon is personified — it “doth with delight,” as if it shares in joy.
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This continues the idea that nature itself is animated, expressive, almost conscious.
Yet notice: this delight seems to belong to the moon, not fully to the speaker. The emotional center is beginning to drift away from him.
Line 13
“Look round her when the heavens are bare;”
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The moon “looks round her” — another personification, giving nature awareness and presence.
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“When the heavens are bare” suggests a clear night sky, empty of clouds, where the moon shines unobstructed.
This image is serene and spacious. The universe still has order, beauty, and quiet joy.
What’s happening in this stanza?
Wordsworth is showing us something subtle and powerful:
The rainbow still appears
The rose is still lovely
The moon still delights in the sky
Nature has not lost its beauty.
But the speaker’s earlier sense of celestial radiance is not returning. The world is still alive — yet his relationship to it has changed. This deepens the emotional problem of the poem:
If the world is still beautiful, why does it no longer feel divinely illuminated as it did in childhood?
That question will drive the philosophical heart of the Ode.
Line 14
“Waters on a starry night”
The image continues the serene night scene.
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“Waters” reflects moonlight and starlight — shimmering, alive, quietly radiant.
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The phrase suggests beauty multiplied: sky above, water below, both filled with light.
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Nature is still capable of inspiring awe. The universe has not grown dull.
But this beauty now exists outside the speaker rather than flooding through him.
Line 15
“Are beautiful and fair;”
Wordsworth says it plainly: the world is still beautiful.
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“Beautiful” and “fair” are almost redundant — he doubles down to remove any doubt.
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This is important philosophically: he is not claiming the world has changed, only his perception of it.
That distinction is crucial to the poem’s emotional honesty.
Line 16
“The sunshine is a glorious birth;”
Now we move from night to day again.
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“Glorious birth” suggests renewal, beginning, life emerging — like dawn as a daily creation.
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The world still participates in cycles of wonder and rebirth. Morning still feels like a miracle.
This echoes the earlier sense that childhood perception made every day feel new — yet now that renewal is observed, not fully inhabited.
Line 17
“But yet I know, where’er I go,”
Here comes the emotional turn of the stanza.
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“But yet” signals a contrast between outer beauty and inner loss.
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“I know” suggests a settled, unavoidable awareness. This is not a passing mood; it is a condition of adulthood.
Even surrounded by splendor, he carries a quiet knowledge that something essential has changed.
Line 18
“That there hath past away a glory from the earth.”
This is the emotional echo of the earlier line:
“The things which I have seen I now can see no more.”
But here it is framed differently:
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Not all beauty is gone — roses, rainbows, moonlight remain.
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What has passed away is “a glory” — a particular radiance, a spiritual intensity that once suffused everything.
Notice he says “a glory,” not “the glory.”
That small detail matters. It suggests:
This prepares us for the later consolation of the Ode: adulthood brings depth, memory, and reflective insight, even if it loses the immediate blaze of childhood vision.
So this stanza tells us:
The world is still beautiful
Nature still celebrates itself
But the speaker feels a quiet, irreversible dimming
And now the poem will ask:
Why did that glory exist in the first place? And where does it go?
That’s where the great “trailing clouds of glory” passage is heading.
Now, while the birds thus sing a joyous song,
And while the young lambs bound
As to the tabor's sound,
To me alone there came a thought of grief:
A timely utterance gave that thought relief,
And I again am strong:
The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;
No more shall grief of mine the season wrong;
I hear the Echoes through the mountains throng,
The Winds come to me from the fields of sleep,
And all the earth is gay;
Land and sea
Give themselves up to jollity,
And with the heart of May
Doth every Beast keep holiday;—
Thou Child of Joy,
Shout round me, let me hear thy shouts, thou happy Shepherd-boy.
Line 19
“Now, while the birds thus sing a joyous song,”
We return to the present moment in nature.
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The birds are singing — and not just singing, but a “joyous song.”
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Spring is alive with sound, vitality, and renewal.
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Nature is in a state of celebration.
But this joy forms a contrast: the speaker does not fully share in it.
Line 20
“And while the young lambs bound”
Now we move from sound to motion.
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Lambs bounding = pure, physical exuberance.
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Lambs symbolize innocence, youth, and new life — they are literal embodiments of the childhood state Wordsworth mourns.
Nature is acting out the very vitality the poet feels slipping away within himself.
Line 21
“As to the tabor’s sound,”
A tabor is a small drum used in rustic dances.
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Wordsworth imagines the lambs bounding as if dancing to music.
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This turns the landscape into a festival scene — rhythm, motion, joy.
Spring itself feels like a village celebration, full of life and communal energy.
Line 22
“To me alone there came a thought of grief:”
Here the emotional contrast crystallizes.
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“To me alone” isolates the speaker. Nature rejoices, but he stands apart.
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“A thought of grief” — not overwhelming despair, but a sudden inner ache, a memory of loss.
This grief is not caused by present suffering, but by comparison:
The world is young — he is no longer young in spirit.
Line 23
“A timely utterance gave that thought relief,”
Something happens that eases the grief.
Wordsworth often shows that naming an emotion transforms it. Expression becomes healing.
Line 24
“And I again am strong:”
The act of expression restores him.
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He doesn’t regain childhood vision, but he regains emotional balance.
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Poetry itself becomes a means of recovery — not of lost glory, but of inner strength.
Line 25
“The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;”
Now the landscape joins the celebration in grander tones.
Nature becomes orchestral, triumphant, almost ceremonial.
Line 26
“No more shall grief of mine the season wrong;”
He resolves not to let his private sorrow overshadow spring.
This is emotional maturity — he doesn’t deny loss, but he doesn’t let it poison beauty.
Line 27
“I hear the Echoes through the mountains throng,”
Sound fills the world.
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Echoes multiply, suggesting vastness and resonance.
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Nature’s voice is bigger than his private sadness.
Line 28
“The winds come to me from the fields of sleep,”
This is a mysterious, dreamlike line.
Even here, the language hints that the material and spiritual worlds are still connected.
Line 29
“And all the earth is gay;”
“Gay” here means joyful, lively.
The world is celebrating existence itself.
Line 30
“Land and sea / Give themselves up to jollity,”
Total immersion in joy.
Nature is not restrained — it abandons itself to delight.
Line 31
“And with the heart of May / Doth every Beast keep holiday;—”
May = late spring, peak vitality.
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“Keep holiday” means to celebrate, to rest from labor, to rejoice.
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Even animals participate in this festival of life.
Line 32
“Thou Child of Joy,”
Now Wordsworth addresses a specific child — often thought to be a real child he sees playing.
This child represents living childhood presence, not memory.
Line 33
“Shout round me, let me hear thy shouts, thou happy Shepherd-boy!”
He invites the child’s joy into his own experience.
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The adult cannot recover childhood vision directly, but he can witness it in others.
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The shepherd-boy becomes a living reminder that the glory still exists — just not in him as it once did.
What this section shows
Nature is in full celebration
Youth and innocence are everywhere
The poet feels a stab of grief
Expression brings relief
He chooses to rejoin the joy of the present
This is a turning point: instead of only mourning loss, he begins learning how to live meaningfully after it.
Next comes the great philosophical explanation — why childhood shines and where that light goes.
Ye blessed creatures, I have heard the call
Ye to each other make; I see
The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee;
My heart is at your festival,
My head hath its coronal,
The fulness of your bliss, I feel—I feel it all.
Oh evil day! if I were sullen
While Earth herself is adorning,
This sweet May-morning,
And the Children are culling
On every side,
In a thousand valleys far and wide,
Fresh flowers; while the sun shines warm,
And the Babe leaps up on his Mother's arm:—
I hear, I hear, with joy I hear!
—But there's a Tree, of many, one,
A single field which I have looked upon,
Both of them speak of something that is gone;
The Pansy at my feet
Doth the same tale repeat:
Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?
Line 34
“Ye blessèd creatures, I have heard the call”
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Wordsworth addresses all joyful beings — children, lambs, birds.
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“Blessèd” gives them a sacred quality.
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“I have heard the call” signals that he perceives their shared joy, acknowledging life’s celebration.
Line 35
“Ye to each other make; I see”
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Joy is relational — shared among beings.
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The poet observes this mutual delight, participating as a witness.
Line 36
“The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee;”
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Personification: the sky itself laughs.
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“Jubilee” = sacred, festive celebration.
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Nature itself mirrors the creatures’ joy, amplifying the effect.
Line 37
“My heart is at your festival,”
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The poet emotionally joins the celebration.
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Though adult perception is diminished, memory and sympathy allow participation.
Line 38
“My head hath its coronal,”
Line 39
“The fulness of your bliss, I feel—I feel it all.”
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Repetition emphasizes intensity.
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Wordsworth feels joy through attention and empathy, even if the original childlike vision has faded.
Line 40
“Oh evil day! if I were sullen
While Earth herself is adorning,
This sweet May-morning,”
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“Oh evil day!” expresses the danger of withdrawing into gloom.
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Earth is dressing herself in springtime beauty.
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The poet reminds himself: to reject this joy would be wrong, almost sacrilegious.
Line 41
“And the Children are culling
On every side,
In a thousand valleys far and wide,
Fresh flowers; while the sun shines warm,
And the Babe leaps up on his Mother's arm:—
I hear, I hear, with joy I hear!”
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Layered pastoral imagery: children, flowers, sunlight, infants.
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Joy is abundant, everywhere.
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The poet rejoices in witnessing life — his adult participation is conscious and intentional.
Line 42
“—But there's a Tree, of many, one,
A single field which I have looked upon,
Both of them speak of something that is gone;
The Pansy at my feet
Doth the same tale repeat:”
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Memory intrudes upon joy.
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Ordinary objects (tree, field, pansy) evoke the lost radiance of childhood vision.
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Nature hasn’t changed — the poet’s perception has.
Line 43
“Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?”
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Rhetorical question expresses loss and longing.
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“Visionary gleam” = the radiant perception of childhood.
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The stanza ends with the core tension of the Ode: the contrast between the persistent beauty of the world and the fading of immediate, luminous perception.
Line 44
“Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:”
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Astonishing idea: birth is not awakening, but a kind of forgetting.
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Wordsworth challenges conventional thinking: we enter the world having already existed in a more luminous, spiritual state.
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“Sleep” = unconscious, veiled awareness; “forgetting” = losing direct knowledge of our divine origin.
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Sets up the philosophical core: childhood vision is residual memory of pre-earthly life.
Line 45
“The Soul that rises with us, our life's Star,”
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The soul is personified as a guiding light, like a star.
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Suggests that life itself is directed by this inner radiance.
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“Life’s Star” = enduring principle that accompanies us through existence.
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Directly connects to earlier celestial imagery: children themselves carry light.
Line 46
“Hath had elsewhere its setting,”
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The soul “set” somewhere before birth — it has a prior existence, echoing Platonic and mystical ideas.
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Childhood brightness is not accidental; it is inherited from a heavenly source.
Line 47
“And cometh from afar:”
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Reinforces distance and origin: the soul comes from a realm beyond the earthly, from God’s home.
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Suggests that the child’s initial vision is a faint echo of heaven, still visible but receding.
Line 48
“Not in entire forgetfulness,”
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Birth is forgetting, but not complete.
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The soul retains traces of its origin, enough that children perceive the world in glory and wonder.
Line 49
“And not in utter nakedness,”
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Children are not born empty or unformed.
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They arrive already clothed in some heavenly radiance, a continuation of the “apparelled in celestial light” motif.
Line 50
“But trailing clouds of glory do we come”
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One of the poem’s most famous images.
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Childhood vision is not fully intact, but still radiant, like a comet with a luminous tail.
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Connects the soul, pre-existence, and perception into a single metaphor: children carry heaven with them.
Line 51
“From God, who is our home:”
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God = origin and ultimate home.
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Childhood innocence is a reminder of our divine source.
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Reinforces the Ode’s spiritual dimension: joy and vision are divinely grounded, not merely human.
Line 52
“Heaven lies about us in our infancy!”
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The child is surrounded by heaven, not merely in communion with it.
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Joy, wonder, and perception of glory are innate and immersive, not learned.
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Connects back to “celestial light” and early lines about the meadow, grove, and stream.
Line 53
“Shades of the prison-house begin to close”
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The “prison-house” = adult limitations: reason, social expectation, and ego.
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Life gradually dims the immediate perception of heaven.
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“Shades… begin to close” is gentle, natural, not abrupt — fading is inevitable and developmental.
Line 54
“Upon the growing Boy,”
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Focus moves to boyhood: the stage between infancy and adulthood.
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The boy still glimpses heavenly radiance, but less purely than the infant.
Line 55
“But he beholds the light, and whence it flows,”
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He can still perceive the source of joy and wonder — the spiritual origin.
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Suggests that intuition, delight, and insight survive early maturation, even as direct perception diminishes.
Line 56
“He sees it in his joy;”
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Joy itself is a vehicle for divine vision.
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Children naturally perceive heaven through emotion and delight, not analysis.
Line 57
“The Youth, who daily farther from the east”
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Youth = adolescence, moving metaphorically “from the east” (birth, sunrise, beginning).
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Suggests growing distance from the original, radiant state.
Line 58
“Must travel, still is Nature's Priest,”
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Even as direct vision fades, the youth becomes a mediator of nature.
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“Nature’s Priest” = adult role of interpretation, reverence, and reflection.
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Spiritual insight persists through memory, study, and communion with nature.
Line 59
“And by the vision splendid
Is on his way attended;”
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“Vision splendid” = lingering glory from childhood perception.
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It escorts the youth through life, guiding and inspiring thought, emotion, and action.
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Memory sustains a faint but vital connection to the divine.
Line 61
“At length the Man perceives it die away,”
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Adulthood = conscious recognition of the fading of childhood’s luminous vision.
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“Die away” = slow, inevitable, natural process.
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He does not regret growth; he observes the change with understanding.
Line 62
“And fade into the light of common day.”
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The celestial radiance dissolves into ordinary experience.
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Adult perception is grounded, practical, rational — no less real, just differently experienced.
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The Ode frames adulthood not as loss alone, but as transformation: joy, insight, and reverence remain, though mediated by memory and reflection.
Summary of lines 44–62
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Childhood vision is heavenly, innate, and derived from the soul.
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Birth = forgetting, but not complete; traces of pre-earthly glory remain.
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Boyhood and youth = gradual fading, yet joy and intuition preserve connection.
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Adulthood = conscious awareness of loss, but memory, reflection, and communion with nature allow spiritual participation.
This passage is the Ode’s central philosophical statement, explaining why childhood feels radiant and how adults can still carry echoes of that vision.
Elenchus: Offer an expanded paraphrase of 44–62.
ChatGPT:
When we’re born, it’s not like we start from scratch — it’s more like waking up from a deep sleep and forgetting a lot of what we already knew. Our soul, that little guiding light we carry through life, has been somewhere else before, and it comes with us, shining quietly in the background. Kids aren’t blank slates; they still carry a piece of heaven with them. That’s why the world seems so full of wonder and magic to them — everything is glowing, alive, and exciting. Wordsworth calls this their “trailing clouds of glory” — like a comet, we arrive in this world with a faint sparkle from another, higher place. Heaven is all around them in those first years.
But as kids grow, life starts closing in. Rules, expectations, and practical concerns slowly dim that brilliant light. The boy still notices it, though — he sees the light and knows where it comes from, and it shows up in his joy. When we get to adolescence, we move further from that original radiance — further from the sunrise of our spiritual origins — but we don’t lose it completely. Even as teens, we still serve as Nature’s Priests, in a sense: we watch, interpret, and respect the natural world, guided by the lingering spark of that early vision. That “splendid vision” of childhood is still walking with us, quietly reminding us of beauty, wonder, and meaning.
Eventually, in adulthood, we notice that the glow has faded. The direct, dazzling wonder of childhood doesn’t hit us the same way anymore. The world itself hasn’t changed — it’s still beautiful — but our perception has. What remains now is a more reflective, conscious appreciation of life. We don’t see heaven in everything like we did as kids, but memory, attention, and awareness let us participate in the beauty and joy of life in a grown-up way. We carry the echoes of that early glory with us, even if it’s no longer blazing all around.
Elenchus: Please continue with the next stanza.
ChatGPT:
Earth fills her lap with pleasures of her own;
Yearnings she hath in her own natural kind,
And, even with something of a Mother's mind,
And no unworthy aim,
The homely Nurse doth all she can
To make her Foster-child, her Inmate Man,
Forget the glories he hath known,
And that imperial palace whence he came.
Line 63
“Earth fills her lap with pleasures of her own;”
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Nature is generous and abundant.
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Even though the child has lost some of the celestial vision, the world itself is still full of delights — flowers, sunlight, rivers, birds, and everyday joys.
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Earth has its own gifts and pleasures that don’t rely on heavenly sparkle.
Line 64
“Yearnings she hath in her own natural kind,”
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Nature herself has longings and purposes — a kind of instinctive energy or life-force.
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Everything in nature strives, grows, and reaches toward fulfillment.
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These yearnings are pure and independent of human concerns.
Line 65
“And, even with something of a Mother's mind,”
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Nature is like a mother. She nurtures, guides, and protects her children — us.
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There is care, gentleness, and intentionality in the way she works.
Line 66
“And no unworthy aim,”
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Nature’s intentions are good and noble.
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She does not aim to deceive or harm; everything she does serves life, growth, and joy.
Line 67
“The homely Nurse doth all she can”
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Here, Wordsworth likens Nature to a nurse, humble but devoted.
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Her role is to support and care for human life, guiding us along our earthly journey.
Line 68
“To make her Foster-child, her Inmate Man,”
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Humans are Nature’s “foster children” — we live inside her care.
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“Inmate” emphasizes that we dwell in her world, dependent on her for sustenance, guidance, and experience.
Line 69
“Forget the glories he hath known,”
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One of the central tensions of the poem: Nature helps adults adapt, which means letting go of the direct vision of childhood and heaven.
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Forgetting isn’t cruel — it’s part of growing and participating in earthly life.
Line 70
“And that imperial palace whence he came.”
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The “imperial palace” = the soul’s pre-earthly home in heaven, the source of the radiant vision we have as infants.
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Nature, acting as a nurse or mother, gently guides us to live in this world, helping us thrive even though we no longer see heaven with childlike immediacy.
Paraphrase in a conversational style (lines 63–70)
Nature is generous, full of her own pleasures, independent of the glory we once saw as children. She has her own longings, her own natural purposes, and even acts with something like a mother’s care. Her aim is not trivial or misguided — it’s noble and sustaining. She does everything she can to nurture us, her human children, and to help us live in the world she provides. In doing so, she encourages us to let go of the lost, radiant vision of childhood — the heavenly palace we came from — so we can fully inhabit the life she has created for us here.
Behold the Child among his new-born blisses,
A six years' Darling of a pigmy size!
See, where 'mid work of his own hand he lies,
Fretted by sallies of his mother's kisses,
With light upon him from his father's eyes!
See, at his feet, some little plan or chart,
Some fragment from his dream of human life,
Shaped by himself with newly-learned art
A wedding or a festival,
A mourning or a funeral;
And this hath now his heart,
And unto this he frames his song:
Then will he fit his tongue
To dialogues of business, love, or strife;
But it will not be long
Ere this be thrown aside,
And with new joy and pride
The little Actor cons another part;
Filling from time to time his "humorous stage"
With all the Persons, down to palsied Age,
That Life brings with her in her equipage;
As if his whole vocation
Were endless imitation.
Line 71
“Behold the Child among his new-born blisses,”
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“Behold” is an invitation to look closely and attentively. Wordsworth shifts from philosophy back to vivid observation.
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“New-born blisses” suggests joys that are fresh, immediate, and constantly renewing. Childhood happiness is not nostalgic or reflective — it is happening now, moment by moment.
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The child still lives close to the heavenly radiance described earlier.
Line 72
“A six years' Darling of a pigmy size!”
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The child is about six years old — old enough to imagine, but still very small.
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“Darling” conveys affection and preciousness.
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“Pigmy size” emphasizes physical smallness in contrast to the immense imaginative and spiritual significance the child holds in the poem.
Line 73
“See, where 'mid work of his own hand he lies,”
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The child is surrounded by objects he has made — toys, drawings, constructions.
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This shows the creative instinct already active.
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Childhood is a time of world-making, not passive reception.
Line 74
“Fretted by sallies of his mother's kisses,”
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“Fretted” here means playfully bothered or teased.
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“Sallies” suggests sudden bursts — spontaneous affection.
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The mother’s love is lively and physical, grounding the child in earthly family bonds, not just heavenly origins.
Line 75
“With light upon him from his father's eyes!”
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The father’s gaze is described as “light,” echoing earlier imagery of celestial radiance.
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Parental love becomes a reflection of divine light, a bridge between heaven and earth.
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The child is illuminated both spiritually and socially.
Line 76
“See, at his feet, some little plan or chart,”
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The “plan or chart” suggests a map, drawing, or imaginative design.
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It symbolizes the child’s attempt to organize and represent the world, even in miniature.
Line 77
“Some fragment from his dream of human life,”
Line 78
“Shaped by himself with newly-learned art”
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The child is developing skills — drawing, shaping, arranging.
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This line highlights growth and learning, the gradual movement from instinctive vision to constructed understanding.
Line 79
“A wedding or a festival,”
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Joyful social rituals enter his imagination.
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Even without experience, he intuits that celebration and union are central to human life.
Line 80
“A mourning or a funeral;”
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The child also includes sorrow and death.
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This suggests that the child’s imagination contains the full emotional range of life, not only happiness.
Line 81
“And this hath now his heart,”
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At the moment, he is completely absorbed.
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Childhood attention is total and immersive — whatever he imagines becomes his whole emotional world.
Line 82
“And unto this he frames his song:”
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He gives voice to his play, singing or narrating.
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Song links childhood creativity to poetry itself — the child is already a kind of artist.
Line 83
“Then will he fit his tongue”
Line 84
“To dialogues of business, love, or strife;”
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He imitates adult life: work, romance, conflict.
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Play becomes practice for social roles.
Line 85
“But it will not be long”
Line 86
“Ere this be thrown aside,”
Line 87
“And with new joy and pride”
Line 88
“The little Actor cons another part;”
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The child is compared to an actor studying a role.
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“Cons” means studies or memorizes.
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Life is presented as a stage, echoing Shakespeare, but here in the nursery.
Line 89
“Filling from time to time his ‘humorous stage’”
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“Humorous” means whimsical, changeable, lively.
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The child’s imagination is a private theater.
Line 90
“With all the Persons, down to palsied Age,”
Line 91
“That Life brings with her in her equipage;”
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Life is personified as arriving with a procession of characters.
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The child rehearses the full drama of existence before truly living it.
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Equipage (literally, “to equip”) is an old-fashioned word that basically means the full set of gear, attendants, and trappings that go along with someone or something important.
In everyday historical use, it often referred to:
- A carriage plus horses and servants
- Or more generally, the whole retinue or outfit that travels with a person of status
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Wordsworth is personifying Life as if she were a grand lady arriving in a carriage with an entire procession. The child, in his imaginative play, takes on all the roles that come riding along in Life’s procession — from babies to the elderly, from lovers to workers, from the lively to the frail.
Line 92
“As if his whole vocation”
Line 93
“Were endless imitation.”
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Childhood is portrayed as a period of constant imitation and rehearsal.
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This links to Wordsworth’s larger theme: the child begins life close to heaven, but gradually learns the roles of earth.
Paraphrase in a conversational style (lines 71–93)
Look at this child, surrounded by the fresh joys of early life — a little six-year-old, small and dearly loved. He’s lying there among the little things he has made with his own hands, playfully squirming as his mother showers him with affectionate kisses, while his father watches with eyes shining in pride and delight.
At his feet lies some small creation — a drawing, a plan, or a little imagined scene — something that has come from his inner picture of what human life is like. Using the skills he’s only just begun to learn, he shapes these ideas into pretend events: a wedding, a festival, a moment of mourning, even a funeral. Right now, this imagined world completely absorbs him, and he makes up songs to go along with it.
Soon he’ll start shaping his speech to fit these make-believe situations, acting out conversations about work, love, or conflict. But he won’t stay with any one role for long. Before long he’ll toss it aside and, with fresh excitement and pride, take on another character.
Like a little actor studying his lines, he fills his playful “stage” again and again with every kind of person life includes — even old, frail figures. It’s as if his main occupation at this stage of life is to imitate the world endlessly, rehearsing all the parts he will one day truly live.
Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie
Thy Soul's immensity;
Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep
Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,
That, deaf and silent, read'st the eternal deep,
Haunted for ever by the eternal mind,—
Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!
On whom those truths do rest,
Which we are toiling all our lives to find,
In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave;
Thou, over whom thy Immortality
Broods like the Day, a Master o'er a Slave,
A Presence which is not to be put by;
Thou little Child, yet glorious in the might
Of heaven-born freedom on thy being's height,
Why with such earnest pains dost thou provoke
The years to bring the inevitable yoke,
Thus blindly with thy blessedness at strife?
Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,
And custom lie upon thee with a weight,
Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life!
Line 94 — “Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie”
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The child’s outward appearance is misleading.
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He looks small, ordinary, or fragile.
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But this physical exterior hides something far greater within.
Line 95 — “Thy Soul's immensity;”
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The child’s soul is vast and spiritually powerful.
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His inner being dwarfs what is visible on the outside.
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Wordsworth emphasizes the contrast between appearance and reality.
Line 96 — “Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep”
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The child is called a philosopher, not through study, but through natural wisdom.
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He retains knowledge of spiritual and eternal truths that adults struggle to find.
Line 97 — “Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,”
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“Heritage” refers to the child’s spiritual inheritance — a connection to divine truth.
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He is like an eye among the blind; he sees what others cannot.
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Adults have largely lost this vision, so the child stands apart.
Line 98 — “That, deaf and silent, read'st the eternal deep,”
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Though the child cannot articulate it, he perceives profound, eternal truths.
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His knowledge is intuitive and inner, not expressed in speech.
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“Deaf and silent” highlights that this perception is private, spiritual, and innate.
Line 99 — “Haunted for ever by the eternal mind,—”
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The child is constantly influenced by the presence of the divine mind.
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“Haunted” here means permeated or overshadowed, not frightened.
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The eternal mind shapes his understanding and awareness continuously.
Line 100 — “Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!”
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Wordsworth exclaims in praise, addressing the child directly.
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He calls him a prophet and a blessed seer, someone who naturally perceives spiritual truths.
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“Blest” shows that this vision is a divine gift.
Line 101 — “On whom those truths do rest,”
Line 102 — “Which we are toiling all our lives to find,”
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Adults spend their entire lives searching for the same truths.
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Most adults never find them, highlighting the advantage of childhood perception.
Line 103 — “In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave;”
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Many adults die without discovering these truths.
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“Darkness of the grave” emphasizes the finality of death and the loss of spiritual insight.
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Wordsworth contrasts the effortless vision of the child with adult limitation.
Line 104 — “Thou, over whom thy Immortality”
Line 105 — “Broods like the Day, a Master o'er a Slave,”
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Immortality hovers over him like daylight over the earth.
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It dominates and rules his being, like a master controlling a servant.
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The imagery conveys power, constancy, and authority.
Line 106 — “A Presence which is not to be put by;”
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This spiritual presence is inescapable.
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It cannot be ignored or pushed aside.
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It underscores the weight and reality of the child’s innate vision.
Line 107 — “Thou little Child, yet glorious in the might”
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Though small in size, the child is spiritually powerful.
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His inner life is immense and impressive, even if unseen.
Line 108 — “Of heaven-born freedom on thy being's height,”
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The child exists in a state of pure, heavenly freedom.
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His soul is unbounded, elevated, and untainted.
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“Being’s height” emphasizes the peak of his potential and spiritual stature.
Line 109 — “Why with such earnest pains dost thou provoke”
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Wordsworth asks why the child strains so hard.
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“Earnest pains” indicates serious effort and focus.
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The child seems to be acting against his own natural state.
Line 110 — “The years to bring the inevitable yoke,”
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He is hastening toward adulthood, which brings limitations, responsibilities, and burdens.
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The “yoke” symbolizes social and earthly constraints.
Line 111 — “Thus blindly with thy blessedness at strife?”
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The child is, unknowingly, struggling against his own happiness.
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He does not yet realize that adult life will diminish his spiritual freedom.
Line 112 — “Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,”
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Soon his soul will be weighed down with earthly responsibilities, obligations, and experiences.
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“Earthly freight” implies a practical and unavoidable load.
Line 113 — “And custom lie upon thee with a weight,”
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Habit, routine, and societal expectations will press down heavily.
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Custom becomes a force that limits the natural freedom of the child.
Line 114 — “Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life!”
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The weight will be cold and penetrating, like frost.
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It will sink deep, almost as deeply as life itself, marking the loss of innocence and freedom.
Paraphrase in a conversational style
Ah, little one, though you seem so small and ordinary outwardly, I see within you a soul of vast and boundless power. You are a philosopher in your own right, though you know it not, for you hold fast to that inheritance of truth and vision that the rest of us spend our lives seeking in vain. You are like an eye among the blind — silent, yet seeing the eternal depths, ever haunted and guided by the presence of the divine mind. Truly, you are a prophet, a blessed seer, resting already in the truths that we toil so long to grasp and often lose in the darkness of the grave.
And yet, why do you strive so eagerly to bring upon yourself the burdens of years? Why do you rush toward the yoke that life will lay upon you, and struggle blindly against the blessedness that is already yours? Soon your soul shall bear its earthly freight, and custom shall settle upon you like frost, cold, heavy, and deep, almost as deep as life itself, pressing gently but surely upon the freedom and light that are now your own.
O joy! that in our embers
Is something that doth live,
That Nature yet remembers
What was so fugitive!
The thought of our past years in me doth breed
Perpetual benediction: not indeed
For that which is most worthy to be blest;
Delight and liberty, the simple creed
Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest,
With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast:—
Not for these I raise
The song of thanks and praise
But for those obstinate questionings
Of sense and outward things,
Fallings from us, vanishings;
Blank misgivings of a Creature
Moving about in worlds not realised,
High instincts before which our mortal Nature
Did tremble like a guilty thing surprised:
But for those first affections,
Those shadowy recollections,
Which, be they what they may
Are yet the fountain-light of all our day,
Are yet a master-light of all our seeing;
Uphold us, cherish, and have power to make
Our noisy years seem moments in the being
Of the eternal Silence: truths that wake,
To perish never;
Which neither listlessness, nor mad endeavour,
Nor Man nor Boy,
Nor all that is at enmity with joy,
Can utterly abolish or destroy!
Hence in a season of calm weather
Though inland far we be,
Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea
Which brought us hither,
Can in a moment travel thither,
And see the Children sport upon the shore,
And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore.
Line 115 — “O joy! that in our embers”
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Wordsworth begins with an exclamation of wonder and delight.
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“Embers” suggest something small, fading, or dormant within us — yet still alive.
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This line celebrates the inner spark of life and memory that persists even as we grow.
Line 116 — “Is something that doth live,”
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That small spark, that ember, is not gone; it still breathes and endures.
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Wordsworth emphasizes continuity — a life-force or memory that remains from childhood.
Line 117 — “That Nature yet remembers”
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Even Nature, as a living, observing force, remembers what was fleeting.
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Childhood, innocence, and joy are not entirely lost; they linger in us and in the world.
Line 118 — “What was so fugitive!”
Line 119 — “The thought of our past years in me doth breed”
Line 120 — “Perpetual benediction: not indeed”
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This blessing is ongoing (“perpetual”), but he immediately qualifies it.
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The greatest or most obvious joys of childhood are not exactly what he is praising here.
Line 121 — “For that which is most worthy to be blest;”
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He is not celebrating merely the delights or freedoms of childhood themselves.
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The simple pleasures — play, liberty, wonder — are not the core source of this benediction.
Line 122 — “Delight and liberty, the simple creed”
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Childhood is characterized by joy and freedom, a kind of natural belief in living fully in the moment.
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This is the “simple creed” — the intuitive, unstructured life of a child.
Line 123 — “Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest,”
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Joy and freedom pervade children’s lives, whether they are actively engaged or quietly reflecting.
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It shows the universality of this inner life.
Line 124 — “With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast:—”
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Hope is fresh and alive in children, like a newly hatched bird (“new-fledged”).
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There is constant anticipation, possibility, and openness.
Line 125 — “Not for these I raise”
Line 126 — “The song of thanks and praise”
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He formally calls this reflection a “song” of gratitude and reverence.
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Wordsworth frames memory as a spiritual, almost sacred act.
Line 127 — “But for those obstinate questionings”
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The true blessing lies in the persistent, stubborn questions of the mind.
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Curiosity and wonder — even the difficult, unsettling ones — are what shape our lives.
Line 128 — “Of sense and outward things,”
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These are questions about the world, what we perceive, and what we experience.
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He values the child’s engagement with reality, not just passive enjoyment.
Line 129 — “Fallings from us, vanishings;”
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Things come and go in life; we lose experiences, illusions, and moments.
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Wordsworth acknowledges the ephemeral nature of perception and memory.
Line 130 — “Blank misgivings of a Creature”
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The child, and humans generally, experience confusion and doubt about the world.
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These misgivings are part of the process of learning and sensing reality.
Line 131 — “Moving about in worlds not realised,”
Line 132 — “High instincts before which our mortal Nature”
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Innate, elevated instincts — spiritual or moral intuitions — exist in us.
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These instincts inspire awe and reverence, even trembling.
Line 133 — “Did tremble like a guilty thing surprised:”
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Mortals sense something greater than themselves, often unexpectedly.
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The metaphor suggests humility before the spiritual or eternal.
Line 134 — “But for those first affections,”
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Wordsworth returns to the true source of blessing: early emotional attachments.
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These “first affections” — love, attachment, care — remain deeply formative.
Line 135 — “Those shadowy recollections,”
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Early memories are faint and fragile (“shadowy”), yet immensely powerful.
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They continue to shape perception and character.
Line 136 — “Which, be they what they may”
Line 137 — “Are yet the fountain-light of all our day,”
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These memories illuminate our present life, giving perspective and insight.
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They are the origin of understanding and appreciation.
Line 138 — “Are yet a master-light of our seeing;”
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They guide perception, shaping how we interpret the world.
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Wordsworth calls them a “master-light” — the principle by which we see and judge.
Line 139 — “Uphold us, cherish, and have power to make”
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These recollections sustain and nurture us,
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giving life meaning and a sense of continuity with the past.
Line 140 — “Our noisy years seem moments in the being”
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Our busy, turbulent adult lives are reduced to small moments,
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measured against the eternal silence and perspective of these early truths.
Line 141 — “Of the eternal Silence: truths that wake,”
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These truths remain alive, eternal, and unchanging.
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They are not diminished by time or distraction.
Line 142 — “To perish never;”
Line 143 — “Which neither listlessness, nor mad endeavour,”
Line 144 — “Nor Man nor Boy,”
Line 145 — “Nor all that is at enmity with joy,”
Line 146 — “Can utterly abolish or destroy!”
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Their endurance is complete; they survive all challenges,
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remaining a guiding, sustaining light throughout life.
Line 147 — “Hence in a season of calm weather”
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In quiet, reflective moments — even far from the sea —
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our souls can reconnect with these eternal truths.
Line 148 — “Though inland far we be,”
Line 149 — “Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea”
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Our inner being can envision the vast, eternal source of life and memory.
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The “immortal sea” symbolizes the origin of human experience and consciousness.
Line 150 — “Which brought us hither,”
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This sea carried us — spiritually and physically — to our present life.
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Wordsworth emphasizes connection with a larger, eternal order.
Line 151 — “Can in a moment travel thither,”
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Through memory and reflection, we can instantly return to that origin.
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Imagination allows access to the eternal, wherever we are.
Line 152 — “And see the Children sport upon the shore,”
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We can watch children playing in that eternal, idealized space.
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Childhood innocence and joy remain visible in the mind’s eye.
Line 153 — “And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore.”
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The eternal flow of life continues endlessly,
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echoing the enduring presence of childhood, memory, and spiritual truth.
Paraphrase in conversational style
Oh, what joy it is to know that even in the quietest corners of our being, there is something that still lives — a little spark, a memory, a flicker of what once was. Nature herself remembers what was so fleeting in our earliest days, and I feel a blessing rise in me whenever I think of those past years. And yet, it is not simply for the pleasures of childhood — the laughter, the freedom, the new hopes that flutter in a young heart — that I give thanks. No, it is for something deeper: for those stubborn questions that pressed upon our senses, for the uncertainties, the disappearances, the blank misgivings that haunted us as we tried to make sense of the world. It is for those first affections, those shadowy, fragile recollections, that I am truly grateful.
Whatever shape they take, whatever form they assume, they are the fountain-light of all our days. They are the master-light by which we see, the inner source that sustains us and makes all the noisy, bustling years of our lives seem like brief moments when compared to the eternal silence from which they spring. These truths, awakened in us as children, never perish; no idleness, no frantic striving, no adult preoccupations, no force that opposes joy, can ever abolish or destroy them.
And so, even when we are far from the sea, even in the quietest inland places, our souls can reach back to that immortal ocean that brought us here, and in a moment, we are there again. We see the children playing along the shore, hear the eternal waves rolling endlessly, and feel, once more, the abiding presence of that early life and its eternal wisdom.
Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!
And let the young Lambs bound
As to the tabor's sound!
We in thought will join your throng,
Ye that pipe and ye that play,
Ye that through your hearts to-day
Feel the gladness of the May!
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind;
In the primal sympathy
Which having been must ever be;
In the soothing thoughts that spring
Out of human suffering;
In the faith that looks through death,
In years that bring the philosophic mind.
And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,
Forebode not any severing of our loves!
Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;
I only have relinquished one delight
To live beneath your more habitual sway.
I love the Brooks which down their channels fret,
Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;
The innocent brightness of a new-born Day
Is lovely yet;
The Clouds that gather round the setting sun
Do take a sober colouring from an eye
That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;
Another race hath been, and other palms are won.
Thanks to the human heart by which we live,
Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
To me the meanest flower that blows can give
Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.
Line 154 — “Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!”
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Wordsworth calls on the birds to celebrate life.
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Their song represents natural joy and the vitality of spring.
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The repetition emphasizes exuberance and immediacy.
Line 155 — “And let the young Lambs bound”
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The lambs are free and lively, embodying innocence and playful energy.
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The imagery reinforces the untroubled delight of nature.
Line 156 — “As to the tabor's sound!”
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Their bounding is rhythmic, almost musical, as if moving to a drumbeat.
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Wordsworth connects natural motion with human-like celebration.
Line 157 — “We in thought will join your throng,”
Line 158 — “Ye that pipe and ye that play,”
Line 159 — “Ye that through your hearts to-day / Feel the gladness of the May!”
Line 161 — “What though the radiance which was once so bright / Be now for ever taken from my sight,”
Line 163 — “Though nothing can bring back the hour / Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;”
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Memories of the intensity of early experience are irrevocably gone.
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Specific images (grass, flowers) symbolize lost innocence and wonder.
Line 165 — “We will grieve not, rather find / Strength in what remains behind;”
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Rather than mourning loss, he focuses on resilience and continuity.
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The present and memory offer nourishment and insight.
Line 167 — “In the primal sympathy / Which having been must ever be;”
Line 169 — “In the soothing thoughts that spring / Out of human suffering;”
Line 171 — “In the faith that looks through death, / In years that bring the philosophic mind.”
Line 173 — “And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves, / Forebode not any severing of our loves!”
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He addresses the natural world directly, affirming enduring love and connection.
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Wordsworth refuses to imagine separation from nature’s beauty.
Line 175 — “Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might; / I only have relinquished one delight / To live beneath your more habitual sway.”
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Although childhood joys are lost, the power of nature still shapes him.
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He sacrifices fleeting delight for the enduring, steady influence of the natural world.
Line 178 — “I love the Brooks which down their channels fret, / Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;”
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He appreciates streams more deeply now than as a child.
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Experience has added depth to his perception, beyond mere playfulness.
Line 180 — “The innocent brightness of a new-born Day / Is lovely yet;”
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Morning retains beauty and freshness, though now viewed with mature awareness.
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Wordsworth balances innocent delight with adult reflection.
Line 182 — “The Clouds that gather round the setting sun / Do take a sober colouring from an eye / That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;”
Line 185 — “Another race hath been, and other palms are won.”
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He reflects on the passage of generations and accomplishments.
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Achievements and lives come and go, reminding him of human continuity and change.
Line 187 — “Thanks to the human heart by which we live, / Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,”
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Wordsworth expresses gratitude for human emotion.
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Feeling deeply — joy, fear, tenderness — is central to our experience of the world.
Line 190 — “To me the meanest flower that blows can give / Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.”
Paraphrase in conversational style
Sing, my dear birds, sing your joyous songs, and let the young lambs bound about as if keeping time with a tabor drum! I will join you in spirit, celebrating alongside all who feel the gladness of this May day. And though the dazzling brightness of childhood, that glory in the grass and flowers, is forever gone from my eyes, I do not grieve. Instead, I find strength in what remains — the enduring connection to that primal joy that once was, and still, in its own way, must always be. Even in human suffering, comforting thoughts arise; even in the passing of life, faith allows me to see beyond death and into the clarity that comes with age and reflection.
And so, Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves, I do not fear that our love for you will ever be broken. Deep in my heart, I feel your mighty presence still. I have simply let go of one fleeting delight to live more fully under your steady, enduring influence. I love the brooks as they flow along their channels even more than when I tripped lightly beside them as a child. The brightness of a new-born day still fills me with pleasure, and even the clouds gathering around the setting sun take on a sober, meaningful beauty through eyes that have witnessed the brevity and mortality of human life. Another generation passes, and new accomplishments are won, yet thanks to the human heart — with all its tenderness, joys, and fears — even the simplest flower can stir thoughts too deep for tears.
Condensed paraphrase of the entire poem in conversational style
The child is truly the father of the man, and I wish my days could be bound together with the same natural reverence and continuity. There was a time when every meadow, grove, and stream, every sight on earth, seemed radiant, “apparelled in celestial light,” full of dreamlike glory and freshness. That vision is not as bright now; no matter where I turn, day or night, I cannot fully see again what I once saw so effortlessly.
Yet even as I grow, I remember the child I once was — full of wonder, joy, and spontaneous delight. I see the little ones at play, building their imagined worlds, shaping weddings, festivals, funerals with their own hands and hearts. They are actors on life’s humorous stage, endlessly imitating the vast variety of human experience, yet all the while remaining innocent and free. Their vision is untainted, and their souls carry the light of eternity.
Ah, little one, though you appear small and ordinary, your soul is immense. You are a natural philosopher, guided by your own inner eye, seeing what others cannot, haunted and inspired by the eternal mind. You are a prophet, already in possession of truths for which adults struggle all their lives. But why, dear child, do you strain so eagerly toward the burdens of adulthood, toward the inevitable yoke? Soon, the soul that is now free will be weighed down with custom and worldly responsibility, cold and heavy, almost as deep as life itself.
And yet, there is comfort. Even in the embers of memory, the spark of childhood endures. It is not the simple joys — laughter, play, freedom — for which I give thanks, but the first affections, the shadowy, enduring recollections that illuminate all our days. These master-lights of the mind uphold us, sustain us, and make the noisy years of life seem brief in comparison with the eternal silence from which they arise. No idleness, no frantic striving, no opposition can ever destroy these truths, and in calm reflection, our souls can return to that immortal source, seeing children at play and hearing the eternal waters roll ever onward.
Sing, birds, sing! Let the young lambs bound in rhythm with your songs! I join you in spirit, celebrating the gladness of the May. Though the brilliance of childhood is forever lost, I do not grieve. I find strength in what remains — the enduring connection to Nature, the solace of reflection, the insights born from suffering, and the faith that guides us through life and beyond. I love the brooks and the morning light still, now seen with mature understanding; even the clouds around the setting sun are tinted with the awareness of mortality. Generations pass, accomplishments are won, yet thanks to the human heart — tender, joyful, fearful, and feeling — even the simplest flower can inspire thoughts too deep for tears.
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“Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood” Summary
Once upon a time, I saw all of nature, even the most ordinary parts of it, as if it were shining with heavenly light—as luminous, beautiful, and novel as a dream. But it's not like that for me anymore. Wherever I look now, in the nighttime or the daytime, I can't see the things I used to see.
Rainbows appear and disappear; roses are beautiful; the moon looks around with joy in a clear sky; waters reflecting the stars are deeply lovely; and every sunrise is a gorgeous new beginning. And yet I'm aware that, no matter where I wander, some shining light has left this world.
Today, while I listened to the spring birds happily singing, and watched the new lambs hopping around as if they were dancing to the beat of a drum, I was struck by a mournful thought. I soon expressed that thought, which made me feel better, and now I've regained my strength. Up on the mountains, the waterfalls make noises like the sound of trumpets; I'll stop doing the lovely spring a disservice by being sad. I can hear the mountains echoing, the winds seem to come straight out of the land of dreams, and the whole world is happy. The land and the ocean alike are jolly, and every living creature shares the joy of May. You, you happy child: yell joyously, and let me hear you yelling, you gleeful young shepherd!
You lucky, holy living things, I've heard you calling to one another; I can see heaven itself laughing with you as you celebrate. My heart rejoices with you, and my head feels crowned with your happiness: I feel your delight completely. It would be a terrible thing indeed if I were to sulk while the world dresses herself up so beautifully on this gorgeous May morning, and while children everywhere are picking flowers in thousands of valleys all across the world, and while the sun shines and little babies bounce in their mothers' arms. I hear all this celebration with delight! But: there's a single tree out of all the trees in the world, a single field I once saw: both of them remind me that something has gone missing for me. The little flower I see at my feet tells me the same thing. Where has that transcendent illumination I once saw gone? Where's that luminous dreamlike vision now?
When we're born, it's as if we fall asleep and forget where we came from: our souls, which are born with us, rising like little suns, came to earth from a different, far-off world. We don't come to this world having totally forgotten where we came from, and we don't come here as blank slates: we bring clouds of holy light in our wake when we come to the earth from our original home with God. When we're babies, we see heaven all around us! But as children grow up, the jail-like shadows of habit and familiarity begin to draw in around them. For a while, though, they can still see the light of heaven, and where it comes from, and feel its joy. Even as a young man grows up and moves farther and farther away from his origin in heaven, he's still a kind of holy man of nature's religion, and he's accompanied by his heavenly visions. But at last, when he becomes an adult, that special light fades away, and everything just looks mundane and normal.
The earth is full of its own kind of delights, and has its own natural longings. Like a well-intentioned adoptive mother, the caring earth does her best to make humans—who are at once her children and her prisoners—forget the beauties they once could see and the heaven they came from.
Look at the little kid among his newfound pleasures—an adorable little guy, only six years old and teeny-tiny. Look where he sits among his playthings, with his face covered in his mom's kisses and his dad's adoring gaze fixed on him. Look at the game he's planning out there on the floor—some scrap of his childish understanding of life that he's playing out with his new skills. He's playing pretend, acting out weddings and parties, sorrows and funerals, now getting caught up in one and then singing of another. Later, he'll play games to do with the worlds of business, or love, or war. But not for long: soon he'll toss those games aside, too, and proudly, like an actor, he'll take on another role, pretending in turn to go through every experience of human life, all the way up to old age. It's as if his entire purpose were to imitate all the different things grown-ups do.
You, little child, whose small body doesn't reveal the vastness of your soul; you, you wisest of scholars, who still has a connection to heaven, and who can still see what adults are blind to, as you silently look into the deep mysteries all around you, always shadowed by the presence of God: you powerful truth-teller, you holy prophet! You can see everything that we adults spend our whole lives trying to find—only to get lost in a darkness that is like death. But you, who are still so closely connected to your soul's origins that immortality hovers over you like the sun, or like a master over a servant, a mighty presence that can't be ignored; you little child, still glowing with the power that heaven shines down into your soul: why on earth do you so play all these games about adulthood, rushing to grow up and lose all that you have now? Why do you do all this unwitting harm to your sacred good fortune? Your soul will be weighed down with everyday, earthly things soon enough—and habit will crush you like a heavy, icy frost, getting deeper every day you're alive.
Thank goodness that in the burned-down remnants of our former childhood vision, some little spark still glows—and the beauty of nature allows us to remember those fleeting moments of glory. Thinking back on my childhood makes me feel constantly blessed—and not just for those good and worthy qualities, like fun and freedom, that mark out childhood days, or for childhood's optimism and hope. No, it's not these feelings for which I sing my song of gratitude, but for the way I once stubbornly questioned the everyday world; for the sense I had of certainties falling away and disappearing; for the way that, as a child, I could still see beyond the everyday and walk in a world of mysteries. My instinctive sense of holiness used to make my everyday certainties shake like a creature caught red-handed trying to get away with something. I'm grateful for humanity's first feelings of love for the world, and for our faint memories of that love; even if those memories are shadowy now, they're still a fountain of luminous joy, and the guiding light by which we can understand everything we see now. Those memories support us, care for us, and allow us to put all the chaos of day-to-day life into perspective, making the years feel small in comparison to eternity. Once we've perceived eternity in childhood, its truth stays with us and never goes away. Neither boredom nor striving, neither grown-up nor child—not even everything that opposes joy can completely get rid of our first memories of heaven. Thus, in peaceful moments, even when we're very far from our childhood seeing, we can still catch a glimpse of the ocean of eternity that brought our souls here; we can travel there in an instant, and watch children playing on that ocean's shores, and hear the eternal thunder of its waters.
So go ahead and sing happily, birds! And go ahead and hop around as if you're dancing to the music of drums, lambs! Even we grown-ups will, in our minds, join in with all of you who sing and play, who are still truly immersed in the joy of the spring. So what if the holy light I used to see in everything has been taken away from me forever? Even though nothing will ever bring back the time when we adults could see the grass and flowers shining with heavenly beauty, we won't mourn. Instead, we'll draw strength from everything that we do have: from our fundamental connection to nature, which never really goes away; from the consolations we discover when we endure pain; from our belief that death is not the end of the immortal soul; and from the long years of our life, which have taught us to think like philosophers.
And oh, you springs, fields, hills, and forests: god forbid that we should ever stop loving each other! I still feel your power in the deepest parts of my soul. All I've really given up is feeling that power all the time. I love the coursing streams now even more than I did when I danced as easily and joyfully as they do. The fresh shine of sunrise is still beautiful to me. And the clouds at sunset look even more profound to me now that I understand death. I'm playing a different game now than I was when I was a child, and hoping to win different rewards. Thanks to the deep feelings all people steer their lives by—thanks to the heart's affections, its joys, and its fears—I can still look at the most ordinary little flower there is and be profoundly moved.
“Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood” Themes
Theme The Soul's Immortality
The Soul's Immortality
Wordsworth’s poem argues that the human soul is everlasting. The speaker believes that the soul actually comes from heaven, where it exists before people are born, and that it will one day return there. The speaker finds a deep sense of comfort and inspiration in this idea that the soul is eternal, having always existed, and also immortal, going on after death.
The speaker finds evidence for the soul’s immortality in the way children see the world. Looking back on his own childhood, the speaker remembers that the world used to look different, as if everything in nature were shining with its own “celestial light.” In the speaker’s view, this is because young children have only just arrived from heaven, and thus bring heavenly perceptions with them. That is, they can still see a sort of divine, heavenly presence in the physical world that now surrounds them.
The freshness and beauty that the speaker remembers seeing as a child strikes him as a sort of souvenir from his soul’s earlier “home” in God. In other words, the way children perceive the world is an “intimation of immortality,” a hint of what the speaker feels is the deepest truth there is: the human soul is not tied to the mortal body, and instead has its own joyful existence in heaven before it comes to earth.
It gets harder and harder to feel that connection with the eternal as one gets older, the speaker sighs: life is a process of moving further and further from one’s heavenly origins, moving “daily farther from the East.” But even this image, which alludes to the movement of the sun, suggests that after the soul “sets” in death, it will “rise” in heavenly glory again. The memory of his “celestial” childhood vision gives him a “faith that looks through death,” a belief that the soul doesn’t just come from heaven, but returns there—regardless of how final death might seem.
Theme Childhood Wonder and the Pain of Growing Up
Childhood Wonder and the Pain of Growing Up
The poem’s speaker remembers that, when he was a child, the natural world was full of spectacular beauty and wonder. Sure, nature still looks “lovely” to him as an adult, but as a child, he remembers, he could see heavenly light shining in even the most common of plants. He has to work pretty hard not to be “sullen” about losing the ability to see the world this way, but maintains that it’s simply the cost of growing up. The further people get from childhood, the speaker argues, the more used to the world they get, and the less they can perceive the world’s intense, spiritual beauty. The poem presents this as a sad loss, but also as part of the natural order of things.
When he was a child, the speaker remembers, he saw the natural world as a place of immense wonder. Once upon a time, even ordinary grass shone with “splendour”; indeed, all of nature seemed to glow with “celestial light,” illuminated with divine, supernatural beauty. This beauty, the speaker suggests, appears plainly to children both because they’re not yet used to the world, and because their souls have recently arrived from heaven: they’re still seeing the everyday world through the lens of their earlier heavenly existence.
But as people grow up, get familiar with the world, and move farther and farther away from their heavenly origins, this kind of vision fades. The routines and habits of daily life set in, and the world goes from looking enchanted to looking “common.”
This is a painful loss! As an adult, the speaker can’t help but feel like he’s missing something important: he can still appreciate natural beauty, but the “visionary gleam” of childhood is gone forever.
There’s no point in mourning this loss too hard, though: it’s just a natural part of life. When the speaker turns away from his “grief” over the lost “visionary gleam” of childhood, he suggests that such grief “wrong[s]” the beauty of the spring day around him. Even if the loss of that “gleam” hurts, it’s as natural as the changing seasons, and to resist it would be an insult to the order of the world. Everyone, the speaker says, slowly gets used to the day-to-day of human life until “custom” (familiarity or habit) makes the world seem ordinary. There’s no way to avoid this: it’s just part of the journey of human life.
Theme The Consolations of Memory
The Consolations of Memory
The poem’s speaker feels he’s lost a lot by growing up: when he was a child, nature seemed to shine with “celestial light” for him, but as an adult, that luminosity is just a memory. At the same time, he finds that such memories offer some consolation. While he mourns the beauty he could once see, he finds “strength in what remains behind”: his memories of how he saw the world in childhood, and his adult “philosophic mind” that allows him to reflect on those memories.
Growing up and getting used to the wonder of the world, the poem suggests, is a sad but unavoidable part of being alive. But remembering that wonder from an adult perspective is the foundation of mature wisdom, hope, and faith.
Children, this speaker believes, instinctively see the world as a place full of heavenly beauty and wonder. While adults lose their ability to see the world this way, they never forget their memories of that kind of vision. The natural world reminds the speaker of what he used to be able to see there; a particular “Tree” and “a single Field” still speak to him of the heavenly beauty he saw shining in those specific places, once upon a time.
But the speaker’s memories of childhood aren’t just melancholy reminders of what once was: they’re also a “master light,” a guiding beacon of hope and faith. In other words, remembering the beauty and wonder he saw as a child makes him believe that his soul came from heaven—and will one day return there. Sometimes his memories can even take him right back to the verge of the wonder he’s lost, so that he gets a reassuring glimpse of “the immortal sea”—that is, the endless and beautiful afterlife—he believes his soul will one day return to.
Heavenly childhood vision might be fleeting, the speaker suggests, but one’s memories of that beautiful way of seeing can form the foundations of an adult faith in the soul’s immortality. While the world doesn’t shine quite so bright anymore, the speaker’s recollection of its former “celestial light” mean that even “the meanest flower that blows” can still give him hope of an eternal life.
Theme The Beauty and Divinity of Nature
The Beauty and Divinity of Nature
The poem suggests that, even after people lose the shining childhood vision that allows them to see all of nature illuminated with divine light, nature can still bring people close to the divine. Nature, to this speaker, isn’t just a beautiful and consoling place, but a mirror of heaven itself. One doesn’t need to be a visionary child to find hope, comfort, and inspiration in the natural world—nor to get a taste of a heavenly future there.
For the speaker, nature overflows with obvious beauty: “Waters on a starry night / Are beautiful and fair,” he says plainly, and “lovely is the Rose”—these are just the facts! Nature isn’t merely lovely either; it’s aware of its loveliness. The “Moon” looks around with “delight” at the clear skies, and the birds “sing a joyous song,” inviting humans to share in their happiness. The “heavens” themselves “laugh” as nature rejoices in its own loveliness, the speaker says: all that conscious beauty and delight is a reflection of the divine–that is, of a loving and joyful God.
In turn, the speaker imagines heaven as a natural landscape, as an “immortal sea,” “clouds of glory,” and the “east” where the sun rises. The sea’s eternal vastness, the ethereal glow of clouds, and the “glorious birth” of the sunrise all evoke heaven’s endless joy.
Since nature and the divine are mirror images of each other, when the speaker basks in the loveliness of the “Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,” he can feel a connection with heaven, even after he’s lost his childhood ability to see nature shining with “celestial light.”
Because it hints at the eternal joys of heaven, this poem argues, nature has the ability to connect even jaded adults with the divine. Even the “meanest flower that blows” (that is, the lowliest, commonest little blossom) can inspire the speaker with profound thoughts of heavenly eternity—thoughts like the ones that make up this very poem.
Line-by-Line Explanation & Analysis of “Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood”
Lines 1-9
The Immortality Ode begins with a look back.
Wordsworth prefaces his Ode with a few lines from his earlier poem "My Heart Leaps Up"—lines that deal with the idea that the things people experience in childhood shape their lives as adults. The speaker of that poem—who, like the speaker here, is likely Wordsworth himself—goes on to hope that his whole life can reflect the "natural piety" he felt in childhood (that is, a sort of instinctive, inborn religious awe). That feeling is exactly what his Immortality Ode is about to explore.
"There was a time," this poem's speaker begins, when the whole world seemed to shine for him. Back in his childhood, everything in nature appeared to be "[a]pparelled in celestial light"—that is, dressed up in a glow that seemed to come from heaven itself. The language here is like something from a fairy tale: it's as if the speaker is saying, "Once upon a time, I lived in a magical land."
But this land was the "common," normal, everyday world. What was different before wasn't the world itself, but how it "seem[ed]" to the speaker. Then, everything had "the glory and the freshness of a dream." To really understand this line, the reader might want to reflect on a wonderful dream they had: think how vivid and memorable a good dream feels, how bright its images are, and how deeply connected you can feel to the pictures your dreams show you. The shining "glory" and "freshness" of that kind of dream was once this speaker's whole world.
Also take note of the word "glory": it's going to be very important, repeating all through this long poem. The word "glory" suggests, not just that the world once seemed to shine with light for the speaker, but that there was something magnificent, awe-inspiring, and holy about that light.
But then, something changed. Now, when the speaker looks around him, that "glory" is gone: the things he once saw he "now can see no more." What changed? He grew up.
This heartbreaking loss will be the central dilemma of this poem. Where, the speaker will wonder, does the special shine of childhood vision come from—and why does it vanish? How can adults resign themselves to life without that "glory"?
The speaker will explore these profound and deeply-felt questions in the form of an ode. Odes don't use a standardized meter or rhyme scheme. Instead, the speaker will allow his verse to grow organically around his ideas and his emotions.
The reader can already see that happening in the rhyme scheme here:
As the speaker describes his childhood visions in lines 1-5, the rhymes fall into a steady, musical ABABA pattern (that is, alternating lines rhyme).
But when he describes how things have changed for him in his adult life (lines 6-9), the pattern changes, and his CDDC rhymes seem to "turn" back and forth with him as he looks sadly around for any glimpse of the "glory" he's lost.
from https://www.sparknotes.com/poetry/wordsworth/section3/
Summary
In the first stanza, the speaker says wistfully that there was a time when all of nature seemed dreamlike to him, “apparelled in celestial light,” and that that time is past; “the things I have seen I can see no more.” In the second stanza, he says that he still sees the rainbow, and that the rose is still lovely; the moon looks around the sky with delight, and starlight and sunshine are each beautiful. Nonetheless the speaker feels that a glory has passed away from the earth.
In the third stanza, the speaker says that, while listening to the birds sing in springtime and watching the young lambs leap and play, he was stricken with a thought of grief; but the sound of nearby waterfalls, the echoes of the mountains, and the gusting of the winds restored him to strength. He declares that his grief will no longer wrong the joy of the season, and that all the earth is happy. He exhorts a shepherd boy to shout and play around him. In the fourth stanza, he addresses nature’s creatures, and says that his heart participates in their joyful festival. He says that it would be wrong to feel sad on such a beautiful May morning, while children play and laugh among the flowers. Nevertheless, a tree and a field that he looks upon make him think of “something that is gone,” and a pansy at his feet does the same. He asks what has happened to “the visionary gleam”: “Where is it now, the glory and the dream?”
In the fifth stanza, he proclaims that human life is merely “a sleep and a forgetting”—that human beings dwell in a purer, more glorious realm before they enter the earth. “Heaven,” he says, “lies about us in our infancy!” As children, we still retain some memory of that place, which causes our experience of the earth to be suffused with its magic—but as the baby passes through boyhood and young adulthood and into manhood, he sees that magic die. In the sixth stanza, the speaker says that the pleasures unique to earth conspire to help the man forget the “glories” whence he came.
In the seventh stanza, the speaker beholds a six-year-old boy and imagines his life, and the love his mother and father feel for him. He sees the boy playing with some imitated fragment of adult life, “some little plan or chart,” imitating “a wedding or a festival” or “a mourning or a funeral.” The speaker imagines that all human life is a similar imitation. In the eighth stanza, the speaker addresses the child as though he were a mighty prophet of a lost truth, and rhetorically asks him why, when he has access to the glories of his origins, and to the pure experience of nature, he still hurries toward an adult life of custom and “earthly freight.”
In the ninth stanza, the speaker experiences a surge of joy at the thought that his memories of childhood will always grant him a kind of access to that lost world of instinct, innocence , and exploration. In the tenth stanza, bolstered by this joy, he urges the birds to sing, and urges all creatures to participate in “the gladness of the May.” He says that though he has lost some part of the glory of nature and of experience, he will take solace in “primal sympathy,” in memory, and in the fact that the years bring a mature consciousness—“a philosophic mind.” In the final stanza, the speaker says that this mind—which stems from a consciousness of mortality, as opposed to the child’s feeling of immortality—enables him to love nature and natural beauty all the more, for each of nature’s objects can stir him to thought, and even the simplest flower blowing in the wind can raise in him “thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.”
Form
Wordsworth’s Immortality Ode, as it is often called, is written in eleven variable ode stanzas with variable rhyme schemes, in iambic lines with anything from two to five stressed syllables. The rhymes occasionally alternate lines, occasionally fall in couplets, and occasionally occur within a single line (as in “But yet I know, where’er I go” in the second stanza).
Commentary
If “Tintern Abbey” is Wordsworth’s first great statement about the action of childhood memories of nature upon the adult mind, the “Intimations of Immortality” ode is his mature masterpiece on the subject. The poem, whose full title is “Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood,” makes explicit Wordsworth’s belief that life on earth is a dim shadow of an earlier, purer existence, dimly recalled in childhood and then forgotten in the process of growing up. (In the fifth stanza, he writes, “Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting.../Not in entire forgetfulness, / And not in utter nakedness, /But trailing clouds of glory do we come / From God, who is our home....”)
While one might disagree with the poem’s metaphysical hypotheses, there is no arguing with the genius of language at work in this Ode. Wordsworth consciously sets his speaker’s mind at odds with the atmosphere of joyous nature all around him, a rare move by a poet whose consciousness is so habitually in unity with nature. Understanding that his grief stems from his inability to experience the May morning as he would have in childhood, the speaker attempts to enter willfully into a state of cheerfulness; but he is able to find real happiness only when he realizes that “the philosophic mind” has given him the ability to understand nature in deeper, more human terms—as a source of metaphor and guidance for human life. This is very much the same pattern as “Tintern Abbey” ’s, but whereas in the earlier poem Wordsworth made himself joyful, and referred to the “music of humanity” only briefly, in the later poem he explicitly proposes that this music is the remedy for his mature grief.
The structure of the Immortality Ode is also unique in Wordsworth’s work; unlike his characteristically fluid, naturally spoken monologues, the Ode is written in a lilting, songlike cadence with frequent shifts in rhyme scheme and rhythm. Further, rather than progressively exploring a single idea from start to finish, the Ode jumps from idea to idea, always sticking close to the central scene, but frequently making surprising moves, as when the speaker begins to address the “Mighty Prophet” in the eighth stanza—only to reveal midway through his address that the mighty prophet is a six-year-old boy.
Wordsworth’s linguistic strategies are extraordinarily sophisticated and complex in this Ode, as the poem’s use of metaphor and image shifts from the register of lost childhood to the register of the philosophic mind. When the speaker is grieving, the main tactic of the poem is to offer joyous, pastoral nature images, frequently personified—the lambs dancing as to the tabor, the moon looking about her in the sky. But when the poet attains the philosophic mind and his fullest realization about memory and imagination, he begins to employ far more subtle descriptions of nature that, rather than jauntily imposing humanity upon natural objects, simply draw human characteristics out of their natural presences, referring back to human qualities from earlier in the poem.
So, in the final stanza, the brooks “fret” down their channels, just as the child’s mother “fretted” him with kisses earlier in the poem; they trip lightly just as the speaker “tripped lightly” as a child; the Day is new-born, innocent, and bright, just as a child would be; the clouds “gather round the setting sun” and “take a sober coloring,” just as mourners at a funeral (recalling the child’s playing with some fragment from “a mourning or a funeral” earlier in the poem) might gather soberly around a grave. The effect is to illustrate how, in the process of imaginative creativity possible to the mature mind, the shapes of humanity can be found in nature and vice-versa. (Recall the “music of humanity” in “Tintern Abbey.”) A flower can summon thoughts too deep for tears because a flower can embody the shape of human life, and it is the mind of maturity combined with the memory of childhood that enables the poet to make that vital and moving connection.
from https://interestingliterature.com/2020/08/wordsworth-ode-intimations-of-immortality-summary-analysis/
A Summary and Analysis of William Wordsworth’s ‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality’
By Dr Oliver Tearle (Loughborough University)
‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood’ is one of William Wordsworth’s best-known and best-loved poems.
Perhaps the best way to offer an analysis of this long poem is to go through it, section by section. So we’ll offer a sort of combined summary and analysis as we go.
First, let’s start with the poem’s epigraph. In 1802, Wordsworth wrote a short poem which became known as ‘The Rainbow’, which includes the lines:
The Child is Father of the Man;
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
The paradox of the line ‘The Child is father of the Man’ is that our childhoods shape our adulthoods: the inversion of the usual idea of things (that an adult man is a father to his child) neatly embodies Romanticism’s desire to shake up the way we view ourselves, and to (an idea expressed before Romanticism, notably in Henry Vaughan’s fine poem ‘The Retreat’; but it was Wordsworth and the Romantics who made the idea a central part of their worldview).
These three lines establish the tone for ‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality’: the poem is about the formative years of childhood and how they helped to make Wordsworth the man, and poet, he became. Wordsworth wrote ‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality’ between March 1802 and March 1804; it was published in 1807.
The three lines from ‘The Rainbow’ (‘My heart leaps up’) were only added as epigraph in 1815; the original epigraph in 1807 was from the Roman poet Virgil, and translates as ‘Let us sing a loftier strain’. In a note to the poem, Wordsworth wrote:
This was composed during my residence at Town-end, Grasmere. Two years at least passed between the writing of the four first stanzas and the remaining part. To the attentive and competent reader the whole sufficiently explains itself; but there may be no harm in adverting here to particular feelings or ‘experiences’ of my own mind on which the structure of the poem partly rests. Nothing was more difficult for me in childhood than to admit the notion of death as a state applicable to my own being.
Here is the text of ‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality’ with our own notes, added by way of summary and analysis.
There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;—
Turn wheresoe’er I may,
By night or day.
The things which I have seen I now can see no more.
When he was a child, Wordsworth could detect the heavenly (‘celestial’) magic in the natural world around him: every meadow, grove, and stream seemed imbued with a divine, dreamlike magic. Now he’s an adult, Wordsworth has lost sight of the wonder he used to be able to detect in the world of nature.
The Rainbow comes and goes,
And lovely is the Rose,
The Moon doth with delight
Look round her when the heavens are bare,
Waters on a starry night
Are beautiful and fair;
The sunshine is a glorious birth;
But yet I know, where’er I go,
That there hath past away a glory from the earth.
Wordsworth acknowledges that nature is as beautiful as it was when he was young; but the ‘glory’ the earth used to contain seems to have passed away.
Now, while the birds thus sing a joyous song,
And while the young lambs bound
As to the tabor’s sound,
To me alone there came a thought of grief:
A timely utterance gave that thought relief,
And I again am strong:
The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;
No more shall grief of mine the season wrong;
I hear the Echoes through the mountains throng,
The Winds come to me from the fields of sleep,
And all the earth is gay;
Land and sea
Give themselves up to jollity,
And with the heart of May
Doth every Beast keep holiday;—
Thou Child of Joy,
Shout round me, let me hear thy shouts, thou happy Shepherd-boy.
Wordsworth now acknowledges that the fault lies within him, rather than in any change that has come over the world. We are not in the realm of social or historical analysis here, but personal, subjective feeling. How many of us feel that the world has changed since we were a child, and that it has lost its way?
It seems less magical; yet to younger generations, it is doubtless filled with the same wonder we once had for it. In response to Morrissey’s question, ‘Has the world changed or have I changed?’ we feel confident answering, in the case of Wordsworth, with a resounding ‘You have’.
Indeed, Wordsworth feels ‘grief’ over the world that surrounds him, even though it is filled with the same signs and sounds of joy and life: birds are singing, young lambs are bleating.
As so often in a Romantic poem – see Shelley’s ‘To a Skylark’ for another example, where the poet calls upon the lark to sing to him so the poet can be inspired by the sound – the solitary poet wants nature to save him from himself and reconnect him with the majesty of the natural world – even the shepherd-boy tending those lambs can help Wordsworth to recover that lost sense of awe he felt towards the earth (the key word here is boy: the child can help Wordsworth to recall how he felt towards nature when he was young).
Ye blessed creatures, I have heard the call
Ye to each other make; I see
The heavens laugh with you in your jubilee;
My heart is at your festival,
My head hath its coronal,
The fulness of your bliss, I feel—I feel it all.
Oh evil day! if I were sullen
While Earth herself is adorning,
This sweet May-morning,
And the Children are culling
On every side,
In a thousand valleys far and wide,
Fresh flowers; while the sun shines warm,
And the Babe leaps up on his Mother’s arm:—
I hear, I hear, with joy I hear!
—But there’s a Tree, of many, one,
A single field which I have looked upon,
Both of them speak of something that is gone;
The Pansy at my feet
Doth the same tale repeat:
Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream?
Indeed, it would be churlish, even perverse, to be ‘sullen’ when everything around the poet is filled with joy and life. Yet Wordsworth knows of a tree and a field which both ‘speak of something that is gone’: something has been lost. What happened to the ‘visionary gleam’ or glow that suffused everything when he was younger? Where has it gone?
Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:
The Soul that rises with us, our life’s Star,
Hath had elsewhere its setting,
And cometh from afar:
Not in entire forgetfulness,
And not in utter nakedness,
But trailing clouds of glory do we come
From God, who is our home:
Heaven lies about us in our infancy!
Shades of the prison-house begin to close
Upon the growing Boy,
But he beholds the light, and whence it flows,
He sees it in his joy;
The Youth, who daily farther from the east
Must travel, still is Nature’s Priest,
And by the vision splendid
Is on his way attended;
At length the Man perceives it die away,
And fade into the light of common day.
The sentiment behind these lines is that we are more than just flesh and blood, and that we have a deeper kinship with the natural world, and with God. When we are born, that is not the beginning: we arise from a much bigger, deeper, longer organism that is the world (and, beyond the world, God).
When we are very young, we are surrounded by the divinity of heaven, but the ‘prison-house’ begins to close in on us, even while we are still children, but we keep it in our sight; when we are a bit older, on the threshold between youth and adulthood, we believe in its majesty; but once we arrive at adulthood we lose it altogether.
Earth fills her lap with pleasures of her own;
Yearnings she hath in her own natural kind,
And, even with something of a Mother’s mind,
And no unworthy aim,
The homely Nurse doth all she can
To make her Foster-child, her Inmate Man,
Forget the glories he hath known,
And that imperial palace whence he came.
Nature, and the earth, is like a mother (Mother Nature), conspires with this act of forgetting – perhaps because, like any mother, she knows that the young boy will have to grow up into a man who can go out into the world, earn a living, and accept the realities of the world (with all its limitations). We cannot spend all our lives going around gawping at the wonders of the universe, unless we’re Brian Cox.
Wordsworth doesn’t blame the earth for this, or see it as a betrayal: it is ‘no unworthy aim’ because, like a good mother, the earth knows what’s good for the child of nature (even if it comes at the cost of removing this sense of awe from the child’s mind).
Behold the Child among his new-born blisses,
A six years’ Darling of a pigmy size!
See, where ’mid work of his own hand he lies,
Fretted by sallies of his mother’s kisses,
With light upon him from his father’s eyes!
The young child is doted upon by his mother (nature?) and watched over by his father (God?).
See, at his feet, some little plan or chart,
Some fragment from his dream of human life,
Shaped by himself with newly-learned art
A wedding or a festival,
A mourning or a funeral;
And this hath now his heart,
And unto this he frames his song:
Then will he fit his tongue
To dialogues of business, love, or strife;
But it will not be long
Ere this be thrown aside,
And with new joy and pride
The little Actor cons another part;
Filling from time to time his ‘humorous stage’
With all the Persons, down to palsied Age,
That Life brings with her in her equipage;
As if his whole vocation
Were endless imitation.
The Child starts to learn to create things which arise not from nature itself but from more practical concerns: he learns to ‘fit his tongue / To dialogues of business, love, or strife’ rather than praise of the earth. Soon, his ‘vocation’ or purpose seems to be ‘endless imitation’, like an actor: trying to conduct oneself on the ‘stage’ of life correctly, rather than keeping that deep bond with nature.
Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie
Thy Soul’s immensity;
Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep
Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,
That, deaf and silent, read’st the eternal deep,
Haunted for ever by the eternal mind,—
Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!
On whom those truths do rest,
Which we are toiling all our lives to find,
In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave;
Thou, over whom thy Immortality
Broods like the Day, a Master o’er a Slave,
A Presence which is not to be put by;
Thou little Child, yet glorious in the might
Of heaven-born freedom on thy being’s height,
Why with such earnest pains dost thou provoke
The years to bring the inevitable yoke,
Thus blindly with thy blessedness at strife?
Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,
And custom lie upon thee with a weight,
Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life!
Wordsworth addresses nature as the ‘best Philosopher’, praising it for its wisdom and immortality, yet asking nature why it strives to limit man’s understanding of its beauty as the years march on, placing us within a limiting ‘yoke’ like an ox ploughing a field. Why does nature conspire to make us less in touch with it as the years progress, demanding that we devote ourselves to more humdrum things like work?
O joy! that in our embers
Is something that doth live,
That Nature yet remembers
What was so fugitive!
The thought of our past years in me doth breed
Perpetual benediction: not indeed
For that which is most worthy to be blest;
Wordsworth delights that there yet remains a glimmer of that childhood wonder in him, despite the marching years. It’s like a few sparks of life among the dying embers of a fire. Its power is ‘perpetual benediction’: an eternal blessing, religious in its power.
Which among us does not, from time to time, visit a place, or smell a smell, or revisit a book or hear a song, which transports us vividly back to our childhood and youth, and allows us to recollect (if only for a short while) how we felt when we were young? (If you’re still young and reading this, then it’s true what people say: cherish these years, even the pain and heartache they bring, for even that will take on importance when recollected years later.)
Delight and liberty, the simple creed
Of Childhood, whether busy or at rest,
With new-fledged hope still fluttering in his breast:—
Not for these I raise
The song of thanks and praise
But for those obstinate questionings
Of sense and outward things,
Fallings from us, vanishings;
Wordsworth says that, good as joy, freedom, and hope are, and nice as it is to remember how sweet they were when we were young, it’s actually the ‘obstinate questionings / Of sense and outward things’ which he values as he seeks to reconnect with the earth, and through it, with his own childhood.
It’s those things which fall away from us and vanish, evading our grasp and our understanding, which contain the real power. There is something mystical but also mysterious about the natural world.
Blank misgivings of a Creature
Moving about in worlds not realised,
High instincts before which our mortal Nature
Did tremble like a guilty thing surprised:
We now get a sense of the Sublime: that attitude popular with the Romantics which involves not only awe but terror in the face of nature. Our mortality trembles before the immortality of nature, which was here long before we were and will outlast us all.
It is something greater than ourselves, reminding us of how small and insignificant we are. (There’s even an allusion to Shakespeare’s Hamlet in ‘like a guilty thing’, used to describe the Ghost in Shakespeare’s play. Nature makes ghosts of us all in that it kills us all and returns us to the earth from which we sprang.)
But for those first affections,
Those shadowy recollections,
Which, be they what they may
Are yet the fountain-light of all our day,
Are yet a master-light of all our seeing;
More mystery: we may only have partially understood the earth when we were children, or we may only dimly remember how we experienced it all those years ago, but these recollections are still ‘the fountain-light of all our day’ and ‘master-light of all our seeing’: through those early encounters with the natural world, we learned how to see and read the world we now walk amongst.
Uphold us, cherish, and have power to make
Our noisy years seem moments in the being
Of the eternal Silence: truths that wake,
To perish never;
Which neither listlessness, nor mad endeavour,
Nor Man nor Boy,
Nor all that is at enmity with joy,
Can utterly abolish or destroy!
Hence in a season of calm weather
Though inland far we be,
Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea
Which brought us hither,
Can in a moment travel thither,
And see the Children sport upon the shore,
And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore.
Nature has the power to give our brief, ‘noisy’ lives a deeper purpose and meaning, which nobody – and nothing – can destroy. No matter how far from nature we grow, we can connect spiritually with the immortality of nature far away. (Compare here the poem written by Wordsworth’s friend Coleridge, ‘This Lime-Tree Bower My Prison’, which expresses a similar sentiment.)
It’s like being able to travel to the sea even when you’re far inland, and ‘hear’ the roar of the waves and the children playing on the beach, even though you’re miles from the coast.
Then sing, ye Birds, sing, sing a joyous song!
And let the young Lambs bound
As to the tabor’s sound!
We in thought will join your throng,
Ye that pipe and ye that play,
Ye that through your hearts to-day
Feel the gladness of the May!
Returning to the birds and lambs from earlier in the poem, Wordsworth now enjoins them to continue their sport and singing, because he has now lifted his mood and discovered that ‘in thought’ if not in reality, he can re-experience nature as he did when young.
What though the radiance which was once so bright
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind;
In the primal sympathy
Which having been must ever be;
In the soothing thoughts that spring
Out of human suffering;
In the faith that looks through death,
In years that bring the philosophic mind.
What does it matter that the adult Wordsworth can never fully recover the bright vision of the earth he had as a boy? He can find strength in ‘what remains behind’ to him, that ‘primal sympathy’ with nature.
And O, ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,
Forebode not any severing of our loves!
Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;
I only have relinquished one delight
To live beneath your more habitual sway.
Addressing nature, Wordsworth entreats it not to foretell any time when he will become separated from it. He still feels the awesome power of nature in his ‘heart of hearts’ (another Hamlet allusion), and has only given up one delight (his youth and childhood) so that he can continue to enjoy its ‘habitual sway’ from season to season.
I love the Brooks which down their channels fret,
Even more than when I tripped lightly as they;
The innocent brightness of a new-born Day
Is lovely yet;
The Clouds that gather round the setting sun
Do take a sober colouring from an eye
That hath kept watch o’er man’s mortality;
Another race hath been, and other palms are won.
Thanks to the human heart by which we live,
Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
To me the meanest flower that blows can give
Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.
Indeed, Wordsworth confides that he now loves the brooks more now he is older, and that dawn, and a new day, still fill him with appreciation of the world and all it can offer. The clouds gathering round the setting sun, foreshadowing the poet’s own decline and eventual death, remind him also that another day has ended and this has brought new glories.
Thanks to the nature of the human heart, which allows us to connect emotionally with the world around us, even the ‘meanest flower’ inspires thoughts in the poet which ‘lie too deep for tears’.
Tears indeed. Philip Larkin once recalled hearing ‘Ode: Intimations of Immortality’ recited on BBC radio while he was driving, and having to pull over to the side of the road, as his eyes had filled with tears. It remains a powerful poetic meditation on death, the loss of childhood innocence, and the way we tend to get further away from ourselves – our true roots and our beliefs – as we grow older.
But it is not merely elegiac: indeed, it becomes celebratory as Wordsworth comes to realise that the advancing years can still provide opportunities to catch some glimmers of that first encounter with nature as a child.
from Wikipedia:
"Ode: Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood" (also known as "Ode", "Immortality Ode" or "Great Ode") is a poem by William Wordsworth, completed in 1804 and published in Poems, in Two Volumes (1807). The poem was completed in two parts, with the first four stanzas written among a series of poems composed in 1802 about childhood. The first part of the poem was completed on 27 March 1802 and a copy was provided to Wordsworth's friend and fellow poet, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, who responded with his own poem, "Dejection: An Ode", in April. The fourth stanza of the ode ends with a question, and Wordsworth was finally able to answer it with seven additional stanzas completed in early 1804. It was first printed as "Ode" in 1807, and it was not until 1815 that it was edited and reworked to the version that is currently known, "Ode: Intimations of Immortality".
The poem is an irregular Pindaric ode in 11 stanzas that combines aspects of Coleridge's Conversation poems, the religious sentiments of the Bible and the works of Saint Augustine, and aspects of the elegiac and apocalyptic traditions. It is split into three movements: the first four stanzas discuss death, and the loss of youth and innocence; the second four stanzas describes how age causes man to lose sight of the divine, and the final three stanzas express hope that the memory of the divine will allow us to sympathise with our fellow man. The poem relies on the concept of pre-existence, the idea that the soul existed before the body, to connect children with the ability to witness the divine within nature. As children mature, they become more worldly and lose this divine vision, and the ode reveals Wordsworth's understanding of psychological development that is also found in his poems The Prelude and Tintern Abbey. Wordsworth's praise of the child as the "best philosopher" was criticised by Coleridge and became the source of later critical discussion.
Modern critics sometimes have referred to Wordsworth's poem as the "Great Ode"[1][2] and ranked it among his best poems,[3] but this wasn't always the case. Contemporary reviews of the poem were mixed, with many reviewers attacking the work or, like Lord Byron, dismissing the work without analysis. The critics felt that Wordsworth's subject matter was too "low" and some felt that the emphasis on childhood was misplaced. Among the Romantic poets, most praised various aspects of the poem however. By the Victorian period, most reviews of the ode were positive with only John Ruskin taking a strong negative stance against the poem. The poem continued to be well received into the 20th century, with few exceptions. The majority ranked it as one of Wordsworth's greatest poems.
Background
Wordsworth at the age of 28
A divine morning – at Breakfast Wm wrote part of an ode – Mr Olliff sent the Dung & Wm went to work in the garden we sate all day in the Orchard.
— Dorothy Wordsworth, The Grasmere Journal, Saturday 27 March 1802[4]
In 1802, Wordsworth wrote many poems that dealt with his youth. These poems were partly inspired by his conversations with his sister, Dorothy, whom he was living with in the Lake District at the time. The poems, beginning with "The Butterfly" and ending with "To the Cuckoo", were all based on Wordsworth's recalling both the sensory and emotional experience of his childhood. From "To the Cuckoo", he moved on to "The Rainbow", both written on 26 March 1802, and then on to "Ode: Intimation of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood". As he moved from poem to poem, he began to question why, as a child, he once was able to see an immortal presence within nature but as an adult that was fading away except in the few moments he was able to meditate on experiences found in poems like "To the Cuckoo". While sitting at breakfast on 27 March, he began to compose the ode. He was able to write four stanzas that put forth the question about the faded image and ended, "Where is it now, the glory and the dream?" The poem would remain in its smaller, four-stanza version until 1804.[5]
The short version of the ode was possibly finished in one day because Wordsworth left the next day to spend time with Samuel Taylor Coleridge in Keswick.[6] Close to the time Wordsworth and Coleridge climbed the Skiddaw mountain, 3 April 1802, Wordsworth recited the four stanzas of the ode that were completed. The poem impressed Coleridge,[7] and, while with Wordsworth, he was able to provide his response to the ode's question within an early draft of his poem, "Dejection: An Ode".[8] In early 1804, Wordsworth was able to return his attention to working on the ode. It was a busy beginning of the year with Wordsworth having to help Dorothy recover from an illness in addition to writing his poems. The exact time of composition is unknown, but it probably followed his work on The Prelude, which consumed much of February and was finished on 17 March. Many of the lines of the ode are similar to the lines of The Prelude Book V, and he used the rest of the ode to try to answer the question at the end of the fourth stanza.[9]
The poem was first printed in full for Wordsworth's 1807 collection of poems, Poems, in Two Volumes, under the title "Ode".[10] It was the last poem of the second volume of the work,[11] and it had its own title page separating it from the rest of the poems, including the previous poem "Peele Castle". Wordsworth added an epigraph just before publication, "paulò majora canamus". The Latin phrase is from Virgil's Eclogue 4, meaning "let us sing a somewhat loftier song".[12] The poem was reprinted under its full title "Ode: Intimation of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood" for Wordsworth's collection Poems (1815). The reprinted version also contained an epigraph that, according to Henry Crabb Robinson, was added at Crabb's suggestion.[10] The epigraph was from "My Heart Leaps Up".[13] In 1820, Wordsworth issued The Miscellaneous Poems of William Wordsworth that collected the poems he wished to be preserved with an emphasis on ordering the poems, revising the text, and including prose that would provide the theory behind the text. The ode was the final poem of the fourth and final book, and it had its own title-page, suggesting that it was intended as the poem that would serve to represent the completion of his poetic abilities. The 1820 version also had some revisions,[14] including the removal of lines 140 and 141.[15]
Styles
The poem uses an irregular form of the Pindaric ode in 11 stanzas. The lengths of the lines and of the stanzas vary throughout the text, and the poem begins with an iambic meter. The irregularities increase throughout the poem and Stanza IX lacks a regular form before being replaced with a march-like meter in the final two stanzas. The poem also contains multiple enjambments and there is a use of an ABAB rhyme scheme that gives the poem a singsong quality. By the end of the poem, the rhymes start to become as irregular in a similar way to the meter, and the irregular Stanza IX closes with an iambic couplet. The purpose of the change in rhythm, rhyme, and style is to match the emotions expressed in the poem as it develops from idea to idea. The narration of the poem is in the style of an interior monologue,[16] and there are many aspects of the poem that connect it to Coleridge's style of poetry called "Conversation poems", especially the poem's reliance on a one sided discussion that expects a response that never comes.[17] There is also a more traditional original of the discussion style of the poem, as many of the prophetic aspects of the poem are related to the Old Testament of the Bible.[18] Additionally, the reflective and questioning aspects are similar to the Psalms and the works of Saint Augustine, and the ode contains what is reminiscent of Hebrew prayer.[19]
In terms of genre, the poem is an ode, which makes it a poem that is both prayer and contains a celebration of its subject. However, this celebration is mixed with questioning and this hinders the continuity of the poem.[20] The poem is also related to the elegy in that it mourns the loss of childhood vision,[21] and the title page of the 1807 edition emphasises the influence of Virgil's Eclogue 4.[22] Wordsworth's use of the elegy, in his poems including the "Lucy" poems, parts of The Excursion, and others, focus on individuals that protect themselves from a sense of loss by turning to nature or time. He also rejects any kind of fantasy that would take him away from reality while accepting both death and the loss of his own abilities to time while mourning over the loss.[23] However, the elegy is traditionally a private poem while Wordsworth's ode is more public in nature.[24] The poem is also related to the genre of apocalyptic writing in that it focuses on what is seen or the lack of sight. Such poems emphasise the optical sense and were common to many poems written by the Romantic poets, including his own poem The Ruined Cottage, Coleridge's "Dejection: An Ode" and Rime of the Ancient Mariner and Percy Bysshe Shelley's "Hymn to Intellectual Beauty" and "The Zucca".[25]
Poem
1804 holograph copy of Stanza I–III by Mary Wordsworth
The ode contains 11 stanzas split into three movements. The first movement is four stanzas long and discusses the narrator's inability to see the divine glory of nature, the problem of the poem. The second movement is four stanzas long and has a negative response to the problem. The third movement is three stanzas long and contains a positive response to the problem.[26] The ode begins by contrasting the narrator's view of the world as a child and as a man, with what was once a life interconnected to the divine fading away:[27]
There was a time when meadow, grove, and stream,
The earth, and every common sight,
To me did seem
Apparelled in celestial light,
The glory and the freshness of a dream.
It is not now as it hath been of yore;—
Turn wheresoe'er I may,
By night or day,
The things which I have seen I now can see no more. (lines 1–9)
In the second and third stanzas, the narrator continues by describing his surroundings and various aspects of nature that he is no longer able to feel. He feels as if he is separated from the rest of nature until he experiences a moment that brings about feelings of joy that are able to overcome his despair:[28]
To me alone there came a thought of grief:
A timely utterance gave that thought relief,
And I again am strong:
The cataracts blow their trumpets from the steep;
No more shall grief of mine the season wrong; (lines 22–26)
The joy in stanza III slowly fades again in stanza IV as the narrator feels like there is "something that is gone".[28] As the stanza ends, the narrator asks two different questions to end the first movement of the poem. Though they appear to be similar, one asks where the visions are now ("Where is it now") while the other doesn't ("Whither is fled"), and they leave open the possibility that the visions could return:[29]
A single Field which I have looked upon,
Both of them speak of something that is gone:
The Pansy at my feet
Doth the same tale repeat:
Whither is fled the visionary gleam?
Where is it now, the glory and the dream? (lines 52–57)
1804 holograph copy of Stanza III-V by Mary Wordsworth
The second movement begins in stanza V by answering the question of stanza IV by describing a Platonic system of pre-existence. The narrator explains how humans start in an ideal world that slowly fades into a shadowy life:[28]
Our birth is but a sleep and a forgetting:
The Soul that rises with us, our life's Star,
Hath had elsewhere its setting,
And cometh from afar:
Not in entire forgetfulness,
And not in utter nakedness,
But trailing clouds of glory do we come
From God, who is our home:
Heaven lies about us in our infancy!
Shades of the prison-house begin to close
Upon the growing Boy,
But He beholds the light, and whence it flows,
He sees it in his joy; (lines 58–70)
Before the light fades away as the child matures, the narrator emphasises the greatness of the child experiencing the feelings. By the beginning of stanza VIII, the child is described as a great individual,[30] and the stanza is written in the form of a prayer that praises the attributes of children:[31]
Thou, whose exterior semblance doth belie
Thy Soul's immensity;
Thou best Philosopher, who yet dost keep
Thy heritage, thou Eye among the blind,
That, deaf and silent, read'st the eternal deep,
Haunted for ever by the eternal mind, —
Mighty Prophet! Seer blest!
On whom those truths do rest,
Which we are toiling all our lives to find,
In darkness lost, the darkness of the grave; (lines 108–117)
The end of stanza VIII brings about the end of a second movement within the poem. The glories of nature are only described as existing in the past, and the child's understanding of mortality is already causing them to lose what they once had:[29]
Full soon thy Soul shall have her earthly freight,
And custom lie upon thee with a weight,
Heavy as frost, and deep almost as life! (lines 129–131)
The questions in Stanza IV are answered with words of despair in the second movement, but the third movement is filled with joy.[26] Stanza IX contains a mixture of affirmation of life and faith as it seemingly avoids discussing what is lost.[30] The stanza describes how a child is able to see what others do not see because children do not comprehend mortality, and the imagination allows an adult to intimate immortality and bond with his fellow man:[32]
Hence in a season of calm weather
Though inland far we be,
Our Souls have sight of that immortal sea
Which brought us hither,
Can in a moment travel thither,
And see the Children sport upon the shore,
And hear the mighty waters rolling evermore. (lines 164–170)
The children on the shore represents the adult narrator's recollection of childhood, and the recollection allows for an intimation of returning to that mental state. In stanza XI, the imagination allows one to know that there are limits to the world, but it also allows for a return to a state of sympathy with the world lacking any questions or concerns:[33]
The Clouds that gather round the setting sun
Do take a sober colouring from an eye
That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;
Another race hath been, and other palms are won. (lines 199–202)
The poem concludes with an affirmation that, though changed by time, the narrator is able to be the same person he once was:[34]
Thanks to the human heart by which we live,
Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
To me the meanest flower that blows can give
Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears. (lines 203–206)
Themes
The first version of the ode is similar to many of Wordsworth's spring 1802 poems. The ode is like To the Cuckoo in that both poems discuss aspects of nature common to the end of spring. Both poems were crafted at times when the natural imagery could not take place, so Wordsworth had to rely on his imagination to determine the scene. Wordsworth refers to "A timely utterance" in the third stanza, possibly the same event found in his The Rainbow, and the ode contains feelings of regret that the experience must end. This regret is joined with feelings of uneasiness that he no longer feels the same way he did as a boy. The ode reflects Wordsworth's darker feelings that he could no longer return to a peaceful state with nature. This gloomy feeling is also present in The Ruined Cottage and in Tintern Abbey.[35] Of the other 1802 poems, the ode is different from his Resolution and Independence, a poem that describes the qualities needed to become a great poet. The poem argued that a poet should not be excessive or irresponsible in behaviour and contains a sense of assurance that is not found within the original four stanzas. Instead, there is a search for such a feeling but the poem ends without certainty, which relates the ode to Coleridge's poem Dejection: An Ode.[36] When read together, Coleridge's and Wordsworth's poem form a dialogue with an emphasis on the poet's relationship with nature and humanity. However, Wordsworth's original four stanzas describing a loss is made darker in Coleridge and, to Coleridge, only humanity and love are able to help the poet.[37]
While with Wordsworth, Coleridge was able to read the poem and provide his response to the ode's question within an early draft of his poem, Dejection: an Ode. Coleridge's answer was to claim that the glory was the soul and it is a subjective answer to the question. Wordsworth took a different path as he sought to answer the poem, which was to declare that childhood contained the remnants of a beatific state and that being able to experience the beauty that remained later was something to be thankful for. The difference between the two could be attributed to the differences in the poets' childhood experiences; Coleridge suffered from various pain in his youth whereas Wordsworth's was far more pleasant. It is possible that Coleridge's earlier poem, The Mad Monk (1800) influenced the opening of the ode and that discussions between Dorothy and Wordsworth about Coleridge's childhood and painful life were influences on the crafting of the opening stanza of the poem.[38] However, the message in the ode, as with Tintern Abbey, describes the pain and suffering of life as able to dull the memory of early joy from nature but it is unable to completely destroy it.[39] The suffering leads Wordsworth to recognise what is soothing in nature, and he credits the pain as leading to a philosophical understanding of the world.[40]
The poem is similar to the conversation poems created by Coleridge, including Dejection: An Ode. The poems were not real conversations as there is no response to the narrator of the poem, but they are written as if there would be a response. The poems seek to have a response, though it never comes, and the possibility of such a voice though absence is a type of prosopopoeia. In general, Coleridge's poems discuss the cosmic as they long for a response, and it is this aspect, not a possible object of the conversation, that forms the power of the poem. Wordsworth took up the form in both Tintern Abbey and Ode: Intimations of Immortality, but he lacks the generous treatment of the narrator as found in Coleridge's poems. As a whole, Wordsworth's technique is impersonal and more logical, and the narrator is placed in the same position as the object of the conversation. The narrator of Wordsworth is more self-interested and any object beyond the narrator is kept without a possible voice and is turned into a second self of the poet. As such, the conversation has one of the participants lose his identity for the sake of the other and that individual represents loss and mortality.[41]
Pre-existence
The expanded portion of the ode is related to the ideas expressed in Wordsworth's The Prelude Book V in their emphasis on childhood memories and a connection between the divine and humanity. To Wordsworth, the soul was created by the divine and was able to recognise the light in the world. As a person ages, they are no longer able to see the light, but they can still recognise the beauty in the world.[42] He elaborated on this belief in a note to the text: "Archimedes said that he could move the world if he had a point whereon to rest his machine. Who has not felt the same aspirations as regards the world of his own mind? Having to wield some of its elements when I was impelled to write this poem on the "Immortality of the Soul", I took hold of the notion of pre-existence as having sufficient foundation in humanity for authorising me to make for my purpose the best use I could of it as a Poet."[43] This "notion of pre-existence" is somewhat Platonic in nature, and it is the basis for Wordsworth believing that children are able to be the "best philosopher".[44] The idea was not intended as a type of metempsychosis, the reincarnation of the soul from person to person, and Wordsworth later explained that the poem was not meant to be regarded as a complete philosophical view: "In my Ode... I do not profess to give a literal representation of the state of the affections and of the moral being in childhood. I record my feelings at that time,--my absolute spirituality, my 'all-soulness,' if I may so speak. At that time I could not believe that I should lie down quietly in the grave, and that my body would moulder into dust."[45]
Wordsworth's explanation of the origin of the poem suggests that it was inspiration and passion that led to the ode's composition, and he later said that the poem was to deal with the loss of sensations and a desire to overcome the natural process of death. As for the specific passages in the poem that answer the question of the early version, two of the stanzas describe what it is like to be a child in a similar manner to his earlier poem, "To Hartley Coleridge, Six Years Old" dedicated to Coleridge's son. In the previous poem, the subject was Hartley's inability to understand death as an end to life or a separation. In the ode, the child is Wordsworth and, like Hartley or the girl described in "We are Seven", he too was unable to understand death and that inability is transformed into a metaphor for childish feelings. The later stanzas also deal with personal feelings but emphasise Wordsworth's appreciation for being able to experience the spiritual parts of the world and a desire to know what remains after the passion of childhood sensations are gone.[46] This emphasis of the self places mankind in the position of the object of prayer, possibly replacing a celebration of Christ's birth with a celebration of his own as the poem describes mankind coming from the eternal down to earth. Although this emphasis seems non-Christian, many of the poem's images are Judeo-Christian in origin.[47] Additionally, the Platonic theory of pre-existence is related to the Christian understanding of the Incarnation, which is a connection that Shelley drops when he reuses many of Wordsworth's ideas in The Triumph of Life.[48]
The idea of pre-existence within the poem contains only a limited theological component, and Wordsworth later believed that the concept was "far too shadowy a notion to be recommended to faith."[49] In 1989, Gene Ruoff argued that the idea was connected to Christian theology in that the Christian theorist Origen adopted the belief and relied on it in the development of Christian doctrine. What is missing in Origen's platonic system is Wordsworth's emphasis on childhood, which could be found in the beliefs of the Cambridge Platonists and their works, including Henry Vaughan's "The Retreate".[50] Even if the idea is not Christian, it still cannot be said that the poem lacks a theological component because the poem incorporates spiritual images of natural scenes found in childhood.[51] Among those natural scenes, the narrator includes a Hebrew prayer-like praise of God for the restoration of the soul to the body in the morning and the attributing of God's blessing to the various animals he sees. What concerns the narrator is that he is not being renewed like the animals and he is fearful over what he is missing. This is similar to a fear that is provided at the beginning of The Prelude and in Tintern Abbey. As for the understanding of the soul contained within the poem, Wordsworth is more than Platonic in that he holds an Augustinian concept of mercy that leads to the progress of the soul. Wordsworth differs from Augustine in that Wordsworth seeks in the poem to separate himself from the theory of solipsism, the belief that nothing exists outside of the mind. The soul, over time, exists in a world filled with the sublime before moving to the natural world, and the man moves from an egocentric world to a world with nature and then to a world with mankind. This system links nature with a renewal of the self.[52]
Childhood and growth
Ode: Intimations of Immortality is about childhood, but the poem doesn't completely focus on childhood or what was lost from childhood. Instead, the ode, like The Prelude and Tintern Abbey, places an emphasis on how an adult develops from a child and how being absorbed in nature inspires a deeper connection to humanity.[53] The ode focuses not on Dorothy or on Wordsworth's love, Mary Hutchinson, but on himself and is part of what is called his "egotistical sublime".[54] Of his childhood, Wordsworth told Catherine Clarkson in an 1815 letter that the poem "rests entirely upon two recollections of childhood, one that of a splendour in the objects of sense which is passed away, and the other an indisposition to bend to the law of death as applying to our particular case.... A Reader who has not a vivid recollection of these feelings having existed in his mind in childhood cannot understand the poem."[55] Childhood, therefore, becomes a means to exploring memory, and the imagination, as Wordsworth claims in the letter, is connected to man's understanding of immortality. In a letter to Isabella Fenwick, he explained his particular feelings about immortality that he held when young:[56] "I was often unable to think of external things as having external existence, and I communed with all that I saw as something not apart from, but inherent in, my own immaterial nature."[57] These feelings were influenced by Wordsworth's own experience of loss, including the death of his parents, and may have isolated him from society if the feelings did not ease as he matured.[58]
Like the two other poems, The Prelude and Tintern Abbey, the ode discusses Wordsworth's understanding of his own psychological development, but it is not a scientific study of the subject. He believed that it is difficult to understand the soul and emphasises the psychological basis of his visionary abilities, an idea found in the ode but in the form of a lamentation for the loss of vision. To Wordsworth, vision is found in childhood but is lost later, and there are three types of people that lose their vision. The first are men corrupted through either an apathetic view of the visions or through meanness of mind. The second are the "common" people who lose their vision as a natural part of ageing. The last, the gifted, lose parts of their vision, and all three retain at least a limited ability to experience visions. Wordsworth sets up multiple stages, infancy, childhood, adolescence, and maturity as times of development but there is no real boundary between each stage. To Wordsworth, infancy is when the "poetic spirit", the ability to experience visions, is first developed and is based on the infant learning about the world and bonding to nature. As the child goes through adolescence, he continues to bond with nature and this is slowly replaced by a love for humanity, a concept known as "One Life". This leads to the individual despairing and only being able to resist despair through imagination.[59] When describing the stages of human life, one of the images Wordsworth relies on to describe the negative aspects of development is a theatre stage, the Latin idea of theatrum mundi. The idea allows the narrator to claim that people are weighed down by the roles they play over time. The narrator is also able to claim through the metaphor that people are disconnected from reality and see life as if in a dream.[60]
Wordsworth returns to the ideas found within the complete ode many times in his later works. There is also a strong connection between the ode and Wordsworth's Ode to Duty, completed at the same time in 1804. The poems describe Wordsworth's assessment of his poetry and contains reflections on conversations held between Wordsworth and Coleridge on poetry and philosophy. The basis of the Ode to Duty states that love and happiness are important to life, but there is something else necessary to connect an individual to nature, affirming the narrator's loyalty to a benevolent divine presence in the world. However, Wordsworth was never satisfied with the result of Ode to Duty as he was with Ode: Intimations of Immortality.[61] In terms of use of light as a central image, the ode is related to Peele Castle, but the light in the latter poem is seen as an illusion and stands in opposition to the ode's ideas.[62] In an 1809 essay as part of his Essays upon Epitaphs for Coleridge's journal, The Friend, Wordsworth argued that people have intimations that there is an immortal aspect of their life and that without such feelings that joy could not be felt in the world. The argument and the ideas are similar to many of the statements in the ode along with those in The Prelude, Tintern Abbey, and "We Are Seven". He would also return directly to the ode in his 1817 poem Composed upon an Evening of Extraordinary Splendor and Beauty where he evaluates his own evolving life and poetic works while discussing the loss of an early vision of the world's joys. In the Ode: Intimations of Immortality, Wordsworth concluded that he gives thanks that was able to gain even though he lost his vision of the joy in the world, but in the later work he tones down his emphasis on the gain and provides only a muted thanks for what remains of his ability to see the glory in the world.[63]
Wordsworth's ode is a poem that describes how suffering allows for growth and an understanding of nature,[40] and this belief influenced the poetry of other Romantic poets. Wordsworth followed a Virgilian idea called lacrimae rerum, which means that "life is growth" but it implies that there is also loss within life. To Wordsworth, the loss brought about enough to make up for what was taken. Shelley, in his Prometheus Unbound, describes a reality that would be the best that could be developed but always has the suffering, death, and change. John Keats developed an idea called "the Burden of the Mystery" that emphasizes the importance of suffering in the development of man and necessary for maturation.[64] However, Coleridge's Dejection: An Ode describes the loss of his own poetic ability as he aged and mourned what time took. In Coleridge's theory, his poetic abilities were the basis for happiness and without them there would only be misery.[65] In addition to views on suffering, Shelley relies on Wordsworth's idea of pre-existence in The Triumph of Life,[48] and Keats relies on Wordsworth's interrogative technique in many of his poems, but he discards the egocentric aspects of the questions.[66]
Coleridge's analysis
Samuel Taylor Coleridge, friend of Wordsworth and fellow Romantic poet
The ode praises children for being the "best Philosopher" ("lover of truth") because they live in truth and have prophetic abilities.[31] This claim bothers Coleridge and he writes, in Biographia Literaria, that Wordsworth was trying to be a prophet in an area that he could have no claim to prophecy.[67] In his analysis of the poem, Coleridge breaks down many aspects of Wordsworth's claims and asks, "In what sense can the magnificent attributes, above quoted, be appropriated to a child, which would not make them equally suitable to a be, or a dog, or a field of corn: or even to a ship, or to the wind and waves that propel it? The omnipresent Spirit works equally in them, as in the child; and the child is equally unconscious of it as they."[68] The knowledge of nature that Wordsworth thinks is wonderful in children, Coleridge feels is absurd in Wordsworth since a poet couldn't know how to make sense of a child's ability to sense the divine any more than the child with a limited understanding could know of the world.[69] I. A. Richards, in his work Coleridge on Imagination (1934), responds to Coleridge's claims by asking, "Why should Wordsworth deny that, in a much less degree, these attributes are equally suitable to a bee, or a dog, or a field of corn?"[70]
Later, Cleanth Brooks reanalyzes the argument to point out that Wordsworth would include the animals among the children. He also explains that the child is the "best philosopher" because of his understanding of the "eternal deep", which comes from enjoying the world through play: "They are playing with their little spades and sand-buckets along the beach on which the waves break."[71] In 1992, Susan Eilenberg returned to the dispute and defended Coleridge's analysis by explaining that "It exhibits the workings of the ambivalence Coleridge feels toward the character of Wordsworth's poetry; only now, confronting greater poetry, his uneasiness is greater... If Wordsworth's weakness is incongruity, his strength is propriety. That Coleridge should tell us this at such length tells as much about Coleridge as about Wordsworth: reading the second volume of the Biographia, we learn not only Wordsworth's strong and weak points but also the qualities that most interest Coleridge."[72]
Critical reception
George Gordon Byron, second-generation Romantic poet
The Ode: Intimations of Immortality is the most celebrated poem published in Wordsworth's Poems in Two Volumes collection. While modern critics believe that the poems published in Wordsworth's 1807 collection represented a productive and good period of his career, contemporary reviewers were split on the matter and many negative reviews cast doubts on his circle of poets known as the Lake Poets. Negative reviews were found in the Critical Review, Le Beau Monde and Literary Annual Register.[73] George Gordon Byron, a fellow Romantic poet but not an associate of Wordsworth's, responded to Poems in Two Volumes, in a 3 July 1807 Monthly Literary Recreations review, with a claim that the collection lacked the quality found in Lyrical Ballads.[74] When referring to Ode: Intimations of Immortality, he dismissed the poem as Wordsworth's "innocent odes" without providing any in-depth response, stating only: "On the whole, however, with the exception of the above, and other innocent odes of the same cast, we think these volumes display a genius worthy of higher pursuits, and regret that Mr. W. confines his muse to such trifling subjects... Many, with inferior abilities, have acquired a loftier seat on Parnassus, merely by attempting strains in which Mr. W. is more qualified to excel."[75] The poem was received negatively but for a different reason from Wordsworth's and Coleridge's friend Robert Southey, also a Romantic poet. Southey, in an 8 December 1807 letter to Walter Scott, wrote, "There are certainly some pieces there which are good for nothing... and very many which it was highly injudicious to publish.... The Ode upon Pre-existence is a dark subject darkly handled. Coleridge is the only man who could make such a subject luminous."[76]
Francis Jeffrey, critic of the Romantic poetry movement
Francis Jeffrey, a Whig lawyer and editor of the Edinburgh Review, originally favoured Wordsworth's poetry following the publication of Lyrical Ballads in 1798 but turned against the poet from 1802 onward. In response to Wordsworth's 1807 collection of poetry, Jeffrey contributed an anonymous review to the October 1807 Edinburgh Review that condemned Wordsworth's poetry again.[77] In particular, he declared the ode "beyond all doubt, the most illegible and unintelligible part of the publication. We can pretend to give no analysis or explanation of it;-- our readers must make what they can of the following extracts."[78] After quoting the passage, he argues that he has provided enough information for people to judge if Wordsworth's new school of poetry should replace the previous system of poetry: "If we were to stop here, we do not think that Mr Wordsworth, or his admirers, would have any reason to complain; for what we have now quoted is undeniably the most peculiar and characteristic part of his publication, and must be defended and applauded if the merit or originality of his system is to be seriously maintained.[78] In putting forth his own opinion, Jeffrey explains, "In our own opinion, however, the demerit of that system cannot be fairly appretiated, until it be shown, that the author of the bad verses which we have already extracted, can write good verses when he pleases".[78] Jeffrey later wrote a semi-positive review of the ode, for the 12 April 1808 Edinburgh Review, that praised Wordsworth when he was least Romantic in his poetry. He believed that Wordsworth's greatest weakness was portraying the low aspects of life in a lofty tone.[74]
James Montgomery (poet)
Another semi-negative response to the poem followed on 4 January 1808 in the Eclectic Review. The writer, James Montgomery, attacked the 1807 collection of poems for depicting low subjects. When it came to the ode, Montgomery attacked the poem for depicting pre-existence.[74] After quoting the poem with extracts from the whole collection, he claimed, "We need insist no more on the necessity of using, in poetry, a language different from and superior to 'the real language of men,' since Mr. Wordsworth himself is so frequently compelled to employ it, for the expression of thoughts which without it would be incommunicable. These volumes are distinguished by the same blemishes and beauties as were found in their predecessors, but in an inverse proportion: the defects of the poet, in this performance, being as much greater than his merits, as they were less in his former publication."[79] In his conclusion, Montgomery returned to the ode and claimed, that "the reader is turned loose into a wilderness of sublimity, tenderness, bombast, and absurdity, to find out the subject as well as he can... After our preliminary remarks on Mr. Wordsworth's theory of poetical language, and the quotations which we have given from these and his earlier compositions, it will be unnecessary to offer any further estimate or character of his genius. We shall only add one remark.... Of the pieces now published he has said nothing: most of them seem to have been written for no purpose at all, and certainly to no good one."[80] In January 1815, Montgomery returned to Wordsworth's poetry in another review and argues, "Mr. Wordsworth often speaks in ecstatic strains of the pleasure of infancy. If we rightly understand him, he conjectures that the soul comes immediately from a world of pure felicity, when it is born into this troublous scene of care and vicissitude... This brilliant allegory, (for such we must regard it,) is employed to illustrate the mournful truth, that looking back from middle age to the earliest period of remembrance we find, 'That there hath pass'd away a glory from the earth,'... Such is Life".[81]
Later responses
John Taylor Coleridge, nephew of Samuel Taylor Coleridge and lawyer
John Taylor Coleridge, nephew to Samuel Taylor Coleridge, submitted an anonymous review for the April 1814 Quarterly Review. Though it was a review of his uncle's Remorse, he connects the intention and imagery found within Coleridge's poem to that in Ode: Intimation of Immortality and John Wilson's "To a Sleeping Child" when saying, "To an extension or rather a modification of this last mentioned principle [obedience to some internal feeling] may perhaps be attributed the beautiful tenet so strongly inculcated by them of the celestial purity of infancy. 'Heaven lies about us in our infancy,' says Mr. Wordsworth, in a passage which strikingly exemplifies the power of imaginative poetry".[82] John Taylor Coleridge returned to Wordsworth's poetry and the ode in a May 1815 review for the British Critic. In the review, he partially condemns Wordsworth's emphasis in the ode on children being connected to the divine: "His occasional lapses into childish and trivial allusion may be accounted for, from the same tendency. He is obscure, when he leaves out links in the chain of association, which the reader cannot easily supply... In his descriptions of children this is particularly the case, because of his firm belief in a doctrine, more poetical perhaps, than either philosophical or christian, that 'Heaven lies about us in our infancy.'"[83]
John Taylor Coleridge continues by explaining the negative aspects of such a concept: "Though the tenderness and beauty resulting from this opinion be to us a rich overpayment for the occasional strainings and refinements of sentiment to which it has given birth, it has yet often served to make the author ridiculous in common eyes, in that it has led him to state his own fairy dreams as the true interpretation and import of the looks and movements of children, as being even really in their minds."[83] In a February 1821 review for the British Critic, John Taylor Coleridge attacked the poem again for a heretical view found in the notion of pre-existence and how it reappeared in Wordsworth's poem "On an Extraordinary Evening of Splendour and Beauty".[84] However, he does claim that the passage of the ode containing the idea is "a passage of exquisite poetry" and that "A more poetical theory of human nature cannot well be devised, and if the subject were one, upon which error was safe, we should forbear to examine it closely, and yield to the delight we have often received from it in the ode from which the last extract [Ode: Intimations of Immortality] is made."[85] He was to continue: "If, therefore, we had met the doctrine in any poet but Mr. Wordsworth, we should have said nothing; but we believe him to be one not willing to promulgate error, even in poetry, indeed it is manifest that he makes his poetry subservient to his philosophy; and this particular notion is so mixed up by him with others, in which it is impossible to suppose him otherwise than serious; that we are constrained to take it for his real and sober belief."[85]
Leigh Hunt, second-generation Romantic poet
In the same year came responses to the ode by two Romantic writers. Leigh Hunt, a second-generation Romantic poet, added notes to his poem Feast of the Poets that respond to the ideas suggested in Wordsworth's poetry. These ideas include Wordsworth's promotion of a simple mental state without cravings for knowledge, and it is such an ideas that Hunt wanted to mock in his poem. However, Hunt did not disagree completely with Wordsworth's sentiments. After quoting the final lines of the Ode: Intimations of Immortality, those that "Wordsworth has beautifully told us, that to him '--the meanest flow'r that blows can give/ Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears", Hunt claims, "I have no doubt of it; and far be it from me to cast stones into the well in which they lie,-- to disturb those reposing waters,-- that freshness at the bottom of warm hearts,-- those thoughts, which if they are too deep for tears, are also, in their best mood, too tranquil even for smiles. Far be it also from me to hinder the communication of such thoughts to mankind, when they are not sunk beyond their proper depth, so as to make one dizzy in looking down to them."[86] Following Hunt, William Hazlitt, a critic and Romantic writer, wrote a series of essays called "Character of Mr. Wordsworth's New Poems" in three parts, starting in the 21 August 1814 Examiner. Although Hazlitt treated Wordsworth's poetry fairly, he was critical of Wordsworth himself and he removed any positive statements about Wordsworth's person from a reprint of the essays.[87] The 2 October 1814 essay examined poetry as either of imagination or of sentiment, and quotes the final lines of the poem as an example of "The extreme simplicity which some persons have objected to in Mr. Wordsworth's poetry is to be found only in the subject and style: the sentiments are subtle and profound. In the latter respect, his poetry is as much above the common standard or capacity, as in the other it is below it... We go along with him, while he is the subject of his own narrative, but we take leave of him when he makes pedlars and ploughmen his heroes and the interpreters of his sentiments."[88]
John Keats, second-generation Romantic poet
In 1817 came two more responses by Romantic poets to the ode. Coleridge was impressed by the ode's themes, rhythm, and structure since he first heard the beginning stanzas in 1802.[89] In an analysis of Wordsworth's poetry for his work Biographia Literaria (1817), Coleridge described what he considered as both the positives and the defects of the ode. In his argument, he both defended his technique and explained: "Though the instances of this defect in Mr. Wordsworth's poems are so few, that for themselves it would have been scarce just to attract the reader's attention toward them; yet I have dwelt on it, and perhaps the more for this very reason. For being so very few, they cannot sensibly detract from the reputation of an author, who is even characterized by the number of profound truths in his writings, which will stand the severest analysis; and yet few as they are, they are exactly those passages which his blind admirers would be most likely, and best able, to imitate."[90] Of the positives that Coleridge identified within the poem, he placed emphasis on Wordsworth's choice of grammar and language that established a verbal purity in which the words chosen could not be substituted without destroying the beauty of the poem. Another aspect Coleridge favoured was the poem's originality of thought and how it contained Wordsworth's understanding of nature and his own experience. Coleridge also praised the lack of a rigorous structure within the poem and claimed that Wordsworth was able to truly capture the imagination. However, part of Coleridge's analysis of the poem and of the poet tend to describe his idealised version of positives and negative than an actual concrete object.[91] In the same year, it was claimed by Benjamin Bailey, in a 7 May 1849 letter to R. M. Milnes, that John Keats, one of the second-generation Romantic poets, discussed the poem with him. In his recollection, Bailey said, "The following passage from Wordsworth's ode on Immortality [lines 140–148] was deeply felt by Keats, who however at this time seemed to me to value this great Poet rather in particular passages than in the full length portrait, as it were, of the great imaginative & philosophic Christian Poet, which he really is, & which Keats obviously, not long afterwards, felt him to be."[92]
John Lockhart, writer, biographer and critic
Following Coleridge's response was an anonymous review in the May 1820 Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine, possible by either John Lockhart and John Wilson together or just Lockhart on his own. Of Wordsworth's abilities as a poet in general, the review claimed: "Mr Wordsworth ... is entitled to be classed with the very highest names among his predecessors, as a pure and reverent worshipper of the true majest of the English Muse" and that "Of the genius of Mr Wordsworth, in short, it is now in the hands of every man to judge freely and fully, and for himself. Our own opinion, ever since this Journal commenced, has been clearly and entirely before them; and if there be any one person, on whose mind what we have quoted now, is not enough to make an impression similar to that which our own judgment had long before received – we have nothing more to say to that person in regard to the subject of poetry."[93] In discussing the ode in particular, the review characterised the poem as "one of the grandest of his early pieces".[94] In December 1820 came an article in the New Monthly Magazine titled "On the Genius and Writings of Wordsworth" written by Thomas Noon Talfourd. When discussing the poem, Talfourd declared that the ode "is, to our feelings, the noblest piece of lyric poetry in the world. It was the first poem of its author which we read, and never shall we forget the sensations which it excited within us. We had heard the cold sneers attached to his name... and here – in the works of this derided poet – we found a new vein of imaginative sentiment open to us – sacred recollections brought back to our hearts with all the freshness of novelty, and all the venerableness of far-off time".[95] When analysing the relationship between infants and the divine within the poem, the article continued: "What a gift did we then inherit! To have the best and most imperishable of intellectual treasures – the mighty world of reminiscences of the days of infancy – set before us in a new and holier light".[96]
William Blake, a Romantic poet and artist, thought that Wordsworth was at the same level as the poets Dante, Shakespeare, and Milton. In a diary entry for 27 December 1825, H. C. Robinson recounted a conversation between himself and William Blake shortly before Blake's death: "I read to him Wordsworth's incomparable ode, which he heartily enjoyed. But he repeated, 'I fear Wordsworth loves nature, and nature is the work of the Devil. The Devil is in us as 'far as we are nature.'... The parts of Wordsworth's ode which Blake most enjoyed were the most obscure—at all events, those which I least like and comprehend."[97] Following Blake, Chauncy Hare Townshend produced "An Essay on the Theory and the Writings of Wordsworth"for Blackwood's Edinburgh Magazine in 1829. In the third part, he critiqued Wordsworth's use of pre-existence within the poem and asked "unless our author means to say that, having existed from all eternity, we are of an eternal and indestructible essence; or, in other words, that being incarnate portion of the Deity... we are as Immortal as himself. But if the poet intends to affirm this, do you not perceive that he frustrates his own aim?"[98] He continued by explaining why he felt that Wordsworth's concept fell short of any useful purpose: "For if we are of God's indivisible essence, and receive our separate consciousness from the wall of flesh which, at our birth, was raised between us and the Found of Being, we must, on the dissolution of the body... be again merged in the simple and uncompounded Godhead, lose our individual consciousness... in another sense, become as though we had never been."[98] He concluded his analysis with a critique of the poem as a whole: "I should say that Wordsworth does not display in it any great clearness of thought, or felicity of language... the ode in question is not so much abstruse in idea as crabbed in expression. There appears to be a laborious toiling after originality, ending in a dismal want of harmony."[98]
Victorian responses
The ode, like others of Wordsworth's poetry, was favoured by Victorians for its biographical aspects and the way Wordsworth approached feelings of despondency. The American Romantic poet Ralph Waldo Emerson, in his 1856 work English Traits, claimed that the poem "There are torpid places in his mind, there is something hard and sterile in his poetry, want of grace and variety, want of due catholicity and cosmopolitan scope: he had conformities to English politics and tradition; he had egotistic puerilities in the choice and treatment of his subjects; but let us say of him, that, alone in his time he treated the human mind well, and with an absolute trust. His adherence to his poetic creed rested on real inspirations."[99] The editor of Harper's New Monthly Magazine, George William Curtis, praised the ode in his December 1859 column "Editor's Easy Chair" and claimed that "it was Wordsworth who has written one of the greatest English poets... For sustained splendor of imagination, deep, solemn, and progressive thought, and exquisite variety of music, that poem is unsurpassed. Since Milton's 'Ode upon the Nativity' there is nothing so fine, not forgetting Dryden, Pope, Collins, and the rest, who have written odes."[100]
John Stuart Mill, philosopher
The philosopher John Stuart Mill liked Wordsworth's ode and found it influential to the formation of his own thoughts. In his Autobiography (1873), he credited Wordsworth's poetry as being able to relieve his mind and overcome a sense of apathy towards life. Of the poems, he particularly emphasised both Wordsworth's 1815 collection of poetry and the Ode: Intimations of Immortality as providing the most help to him, and he specifically said of the ode: "I found that he too had had similar experience to mine; that he also had felt that the first freshness of youthful enjoyment of life was not lasting; but that he had sought for compensation, and found it, in the way in which he was now teaching me to find it. The result was that I gradually, but completely, emerged from my habitual depression, and was never again subject to it."[101] David Mason followed Mill in an 1875 essay on literature, including Wordsworth's poetry. After quoting from the ode, Mason claimed of the poem: "These, and hundreds of other passages that might be quoted, show that Wordsworth possessed, in a very high degree indeed, the true primary quality of the poet—imagination; a surcharge of personality or vital spirit, perpetually overflowing among the objects of the otherwise conditioned universe, and refashioning them according to its pleasure."[102]
After Mill, critics focused on the ode's status among Wordsworth's other poems. In July 1877, Edward Dowden, in an article for the Contemporary Review, discussed the Transcendental Movement and the nature of the Romantic poets. when referring to Wordsworth and the ode, he claimed: "Wordsworth in his later years lost, as he expresses it, courage, the spring-like hope and confidence which enables a man to advance joyously towards new discovery of truth. But the poet of 'Tintern Abbey' and the 'Ode on Intimations of Immortality' and the 'Prelude' is Wordsworth in his period of highest energy and imaginative light".[103] Matthew Arnold, in his preface to an 1879 edition of Wordsworth's poetry, explains that he was a great lover of the poems. However, he explains why he believed that the ode was not one of the best: "I have a warm admiration for Laodameia and for the great Ode; but if I am to tell the very truth, I find Laodameia not wholly free from something artificial, and the great Ode not wholly free from something declamatory."[104] His concern was over what he saw as the ideas expressed on childhood and maturity: "Even the 'intimations' of the famous Ode, those corner-stones of the supposed philosophic system of Wordsworth... has itself not the character of poetic truth of the best kind; it has no real solidity" "to say that universally this instinct is mighty in childhood, and tends to die away afterwards, is to say what is extremely doubtful... In general, we may say of these high instincts of early childhood... what Thucydides says of the early achievements of the Greek race:--'It is impossible to speak with certainty of what is so remove; but from all that we can really investigate, I should say that they were no very great things.'"[105]
John Ruskin, Victorian critic
The Victorian critic John Ruskin, towards the end of the 19th century, provided short analyses of various writers in his "Nature and Literature" essays collected in "Art and Life: a Ruskin Anthology". In speaking of Wordsworth, Ruskin claimed, "Wordsworth is simply a Westmoreland peasant, with considerably less shrewdness than most border Englishmen or Scotsmen inherit; and no sense of humor; but gifted... with vivid sense of natural beauty, and a pretty turn for reflection, not always acute, but, as far as they reach, medicinal to the fever of the restless and corrupted life around him."[106] After mocking the self-reflective nature of Wordsworth's poetry, he then declared that the poetry was "Tuneful nevertheless at heart, and of the heavenly choir, I gladly and frankly acknowledge him; and our English literature enriched with a new and singular virtue in the aerial purity and healthful rightness of his quiet song;—but aerial only—not ethereal; and lowly in its privacy of light". The ode, to Ruskin, becomes a means to deride Wordsworth's intellect and faith when he claims that Wordsworth was "content with intimations of immortality such as may be in skipping of lambs, and laughter of children-incurious to see in the hands the print of the nails."[106] Ruskin's claims were responded to by an article by Richard Hutton in the 7 August 1880 Spectator.[107] The article, "Mr. Ruskin on Wordsworth", stated, "We should hardly have expected Mr. Ruskin—a great master of irony though he be—to lay his finger so unerringly as he does on the weak point of Wordsworth's sublime ode on the 'Intimations of Immortality,' when he speaks of him—quite falsely, by the way—as 'content with intimations of immortality'".[108] The article continued with praise of Wordsworth and condemns Ruskin further: "But then, though he shows how little he understands the ode, in speaking of Wordsworth as content with such intimations, he undoubtedly does touch the weak chord in what, but for that weak chord, would be one of the greatest of all monuments of human genius... But any one to whom Wordsworth's great ode is the very core of that body of poetry which makes up the best part of his imaginative life, will be as much astonished to find Mr. Ruskin speaking of it so blindly and unmeaningly as he does".[109]
The ode was viewed positively by the end of the century. George Saintsbury, in his A Short History of English Literature (1898), declared the importance and greatness of the ode: "Perhaps twice only, in Tintern Abbey and in the Ode on the Intimations of Immortality, is the full, the perfect Wordsworth, with his half-pantheistic worship of nature, informed and chastened by an intense sense of human conduct, of reverence and almost of humbleness, displayed in the utmost poetic felicity. And these two are accordingly among the great poems of the world. No unfavorable criticism on either — and there has been some, new and old, from persons in whom it is surprising, as well as from persons in whom it is natural — has hurt them, though it may have hurt the critics. They are, if not in every smallest detail, yet as wholes, invulnerable and imperishable. They could not be better done."[110]
Modern responses
At the beginning of the 20th century, response to the ode by critics was mostly positive. Andrew Bradley declared in 1909 that "The Immortality Ode, like King Lear, is its author's greatest product, but not his best piece of work."[111] When speaking of Grasmere and Wordsworth, Elias Sneath wrote in 1912: "It witnessed the composition of a large number of poems, many of which may be regarded among the finest products of his imagination. Most of them have already been considered. However, one remains which, in the judgment of some critics, more than any other poem of the numerous creations of his genius, entitles him to a seat among the Immortals. This is the celebrated [ode]... It is, in some respects, one of his most important works, whether viewed from the stand point of mere art, or from that of poetic insight."[112] George Harper, following Sneath in 1916, described the poem in positive terms and said, "Its radiance comes and goes through a shimmering veil. Yet, when we look close, we find nothing unreal or unfinished. This beauty, though supernal, is not evanescent. It bides our return, and whoever comes to seek it as a little child will find it. The imagery, though changing at every turn, is fresh and simple. The language, though connected with thoughts so serious that they impart to it a classic dignity, is natural and for the most part plain.... Nevertheless, a peculiar glamour surrounds the poem. It is the supreme example of what I may venture to term the romance of philosophic thought."[113]
The 1930s contained criticism that praised the poem, but most critics found fault with particular aspects of the poem. F. R. Leavis, in his Revaluation (1936), argued that "Criticism of Stanza VIII ... has been permissible, even correct, since Coleridge's time. But the empty grandiosity apparent there is merely the local manifestation of a general strain, a general factitiousness. The Ode... belongs to the transition at its critical phase, and contains decided elements of the living."[114] He continued, "But these do not lessen the dissatisfaction that one feels with the movement—the movement that makes the piece an ode in the Grand Style; for, as one reads, it is in terms of the movement that the strain, the falsity, first asserts itself. The manipulations by which the change of mood are indicated have, by the end of the third stanza, produced an effect that, in protest, one described as rhythmic vulgarity..., and the strain revealed in technique has an obvious significance".[114] In 1939, Basil Willey argued that the poem was "greatly superior, as poetry, to its psychological counterpart in The Prelude" but also said that "the semi-Platonic machinery of pre-existence... seems intrusive, and foreign to Wordsworth" before concluding that the poem was the "final and definitive expression to the most poignant experience of his poetic life".[115]
Cleanth Brooks used the Ode: Intimation of Immortality as one of his key works to analyse in his 1947 work The Well Wrought Urn. His analysis broke down the ode as a poem disconnected from its biographical implications and focused on the paradoxes and ironies contained within the language. In introducing his analysis, he claimed that it "may be surmised from what has already been remarked, the 'Ode' for all its fine passages, is not entirely successful as a poem. Yet, we shall be able to make our best defense of it in proportion as we recognize and value its use of ambiguous symbol and paradoxical statement. Indeed, it might be maintained that, failing to do this, we shall miss much of its power as poetry and even some of its accuracy of statement."[116] After breaking down the use of paradox and irony in language, he analyses the statements about the childhood perception of glory in Stanza VI and argued, "This stanza, though not one of the celebrated stanzas of the poem, is one of the most finely ironical. Its structural significance too is of first importance, and has perhaps in the past been given too little weight."[117] After analysing more of the poem, Brooks points out that the lines in Stanza IX contains lines that "are great poetry. They are great poetry because ... the children are not terrified... The children exemplify the attitude toward eternity which the other philosopher, the mature philosopher, wins to with difficulty, if he wins to it at all."[118] In his conclusion about the poem, he argues, "The greatness of the 'Ode' lies in the fact that Wordsworth is about the poet's business here, and is not trying to inculcate anything. Instead, he is trying to dramatize the changing interrelations which determine the major imagery."[119] Following Brooks in 1949, C. M. Bowra stated, "There is no need to dispute the honour in which by common consent it [the ode] is held" but he adds "There are passages in the 'Immortal Ode' which have less than his usual command of rhythm and ability to make a line stand by itself... But these are unimportant. The whole has a capacious sweep, and the form suits the majestic subject... There are moments when we suspect Wordsworth of trying to say more than he means.[120] Similarly, George Mallarby also revealed some flaws in the poem in his 1950 analysis: "In spite of the doubtful philosophical truth of the doctrine of pre-existence borrowed from Platon, in spite of the curiously placed emphasis and an exuberance of feeling somewhat artificially introduced, in spite of the frustrating and unsatisfying conclusion, this poem will remain, so long as the English language remains, one of its chief and unquestionable glories. It lends itself, more than most English odes, to recitation in the grand manner."[121]
By the 1960s and 1970s, the reception of the poem was mixed but remained overall positive. Mary Moorman analysed the poem in 1965 with an emphasis on its biographical origins and Wordsworth's philosophy on the relationship between mankind and nature. When describing the beauty of the poem, she stated, "Wordsworth once spoke of the Ode as 'this famous, ambitious and occasionally magnificent poem'. Yet it is not so much its magnificence that impresses, as the sense of resplendent yet peaceful light in which it is bathed—whether it is the 'celestial light' and 'glory' of the first stanza, or the 'innocent Brightness of a new-born Day' of the last."[122] In 1967, Yvor Winters criticised the poem and claimed that "Wordsworth gives us bad oratory about his own clumsy emotions and a landscape that he has never fully realized."[123] Geoffrey Durrant, in his 1970 analysis of the critical reception of the ode, claimed, "it may be remarked that both the admirers of the Ode, and those who think less well of it, tend to agree that it is unrepresentative, and that its enthusiastic, Dionysian, and mystical vein sets it apart, either on a lonely summit or in a special limbo, from the rest of Wordsworth's work. And the praise that it has received is at times curiously equivocal."[124] In 1975, Richard Brantley, labelling the poem as the "great Ode", claimed that "Wordsworth's task of tracing spiritual maturity, his account of a grace quite as amazing and perhaps even as Christian as the experience recorded in the spiritual autobiography of his day, is therefore essentially completed".[1] He continued by using the ode as evidence that the "poetic record of his remaining life gives little evidence of temptations or errors as unsettling as the ones he faced and made in France."[1] Summarizing the way critics have approached the poem, John Beer claimed in 1978 that the poem "is commonly regarded as the greatest of his shorter works".[3] Additionally, Beer argued that the ode was the basis for the concepts found in Wordsworth's later poetry.[125]
Criticism of the ode during the 1980s ranged in emphasis on which aspects of the poem were most important, but critics were mostly positive regardless of their approach. In 1980, Hunter Davies analysed the period of time when Wordsworth worked on the ode and included it as one of the "scores of poems of unarguable genius",[126] and later declared the poem Wordsworth's "greatest ode".[2] Stephen Gill, in a study of the style of the 1802 poems, argued in 1989 that the poems were new and broad in range with the ode containing "impassioned sublimity".[127] He later compared the ode with Wordsworth's "Ode to Duty" to declare that "The Ode: Intimations, by contrast, rich in phrases that have entered the language and provided titles for other people's books, is Wordsworth's greatest achievement in rhythm and cadence. Together with Tintern Abbey it has always commanded attention as Wordsworth's strongest meditative poem and Wordsworth indicated his assessment of it by ensuring through the layout and printing of his volumes that the Ode stood apart."[128] In 1986, Marjorie Levinson searched for a political basis in many of Wordsworth's poems and argued that the ode, along with "Michael", Peele Castle, and Tintern Abbey, are "incontestably among the poet's greatest works".[129] Susan Wolfson, in the same year, claimed that "the force of the last lines arises from the way the language in which the poet expresses a resolution of grief at the same time renders a metaphor that implies that grief has not been resolved so much as repressed and buried. And this ambiguity involves another, for Wordsworth makes it impossible to decide whether the tension between resolution and repression... is his indirect confession of a failure to achieve transcendence or a knowing evasion of an imperative to do so."[130] After performing a Freudian-based analysis of the ode, William Galperin, in 1989, argues that "Criticism, in short, cannot accept responsibility for The Excursion's failings any more than it is likely to attribute the success of the 'Intimations Ode' to the satisfaction it offers in seeing a sense of entitlement, or self-worth, defended rather than challenged."[131]
1990s critics emphasised individual images within the poem along with Wordsworth's message being the source of the poem's power. In 1991, John Hayden updated Russell Noyes's 1971 biography of Wordsworth and began his analysis of the ode by claiming: "Wordsworth's great 'Ode on Immortality' is not easy to follow nor wholly clear. A basic difficulty of interpretation centers upon what the poet means by 'immortality.'"[132] However, he goes on to declare, "the majority of competent judges acclaim the 'Ode on Immortality' as Wordsworth's most splendid poem. In no other poem are poetic conditions so perfectly fulfilled. There is the right subject, the right imagery to express it, and the right meter and language for both."[133] Thomas McFarland, when emphasising the use of a river as a standard theme in Wordsworth's poems, stated in 1992: "Not only do Wordsworth's greatest statements--'Tintern Abbey', 'The Immortality Ode', 'The Ruined Cottage', 'Michael', the first two books of The Prelude--all overlie a streaming infrashape, but Wordsworth, like the other Romantics, seemed virtually hypnotized by the idea of running water."[134] After analysing the Wordsworth's incorporation of childhood memories into the ode, G. Kim Blank, in 1995, argued, "It is the recognition and finally the acceptance of his difficult feelings that stand behind and in the greatness and power of the Ode, both as a personal utterance and a universal statement. It is no accident that Wordsworth is here most eloquent. Becoming a whole person is the most powerful statement any of us can ever made. Wordsworth in the Ode here makes it for us."[135] In 1997, John Mahoney praised the various aspects of the poem while breaking down its rhythm and style. In particular, he emphasised the poem's full title as "of great importance for all who study the poem carefully" and claimed, "The final stanza is a powerful and peculiarly Wordsworthian valediction."[136]
In the 21st century, the poem was viewed as Wordsworth's best work. Adam Sisman, in 2007, claimed the poem as "one of [Wordsworth's] greatest works".[137] Following in 2008, Paul Fry argued, "Most readers agree that the Platonism of the Intimations Ode is foreign to Wordsworth, and express uneasiness that his most famous poem, the one he always accorded its special place in arranging his successive editions, is also so idiosyncratic."[138] He continued, "As Simplon and Snowdon also suggest, it was a matter of achieving heights (not the depth of 'Tintern Abbey'), and for that reason the metaphor comes easily when one speaks of the Intimations Ode as a high point in Wordsworth's career, to be highlighted in any new addition as a pinnacle of accomplishment, a poem of the transcendental imagination par excellence."[139]
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